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In this world of dreams and thoughts there is no passion, there is serenity and yet Through passion, I gain strength.
I hope you give my Novel a chance, Feel free to hit me as hard as you want with your thoughts!
Forgive the cover, I do not own it and plan on coming up with a better one eventually.
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Tulis ulasanThe starting point of this novel is great. Keep up the good work! Im enjoying it so fa, it is nice to see a different take on a system novel.
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Guess I will be that guy and write myself a review. As the author I think my novel is OK. Feel free to give it a try and tell me what you think!
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For me this cheapens the idea of a system, but it is called world of systems so I can't say anything about that. The thing I can review is the plot which is all over the place with no clues as to what's going on and lots of random things happening with no explanation. It's a shame that out of I think two original novels on this site which have a star wars system one is bad because of a lack of updates and the other is bad (in my opinion) because of the story.