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Mc is a beta and gets a force system and never gets a lightsaber in all of the chapters... Don’t Read ..............…...........................
For me this cheapens the idea of a system, but it is called world of systems so I can't say anything about that. The thing I can review is the plot which is all over the place with no clues as to what's going on and lots of random things happening with no explanation. It's a shame that out of I think two original novels on this site which have a star wars system one is bad because of a lack of updates and the other is bad (in my opinion) because of the story.
The starting point of this novel is great. Keep up the good work! Im enjoying it so fa, it is nice to see a different take on a system novel.
Guess I will be that guy and write myself a review. As the author I think my novel is OK. Feel free to give it a try and tell me what you think!
Disgusting............................,,,,,,,......,,,,:::::::,..............................................................................................
Mc is a beta and gets a force system and never gets a lightsaber in all of the chapters... Don’t Read ..............…...........................
For me this cheapens the idea of a system, but it is called world of systems so I can't say anything about that. The thing I can review is the plot which is all over the place with no clues as to what's going on and lots of random things happening with no explanation. It's a shame that out of I think two original novels on this site which have a star wars system one is bad because of a lack of updates and the other is bad (in my opinion) because of the story.
The starting point of this novel is great. Keep up the good work! Im enjoying it so fa, it is nice to see a different take on a system novel.
Guess I will be that guy and write myself a review. As the author I think my novel is OK. Feel free to give it a try and tell me what you think!
Disgusting............................,,,,,,,......,,,,:::::::,..............................................................................................