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The Saiyan Shinobi of the Omniverse
Penulis: Imabethatguy12345
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I died before dragon ball super came out I died again after we lost during the tournament of power
Now I am in a messed up version of the Naruto world?
Fuck, oh well at least I have my powers
Unfortunately I'm a kid again.
AU Naruto.
No Harem.
tagar
-- Peringkat
Power 
-- Power
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2Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Why is chapter so short ??? Author kun write more character and expand the story and describe world in detail (for ex:- look passerby A going east let's go west) your description is so short that we could not make head or tails on what you want to express
Even a 1.2 is streaching it. The story has great potential, but I can't tell where the story starts, or where the chapters end as theres less than 200 words to each chaper and it feels like trying to read a story in lengh of a summary. Sorry, but this will be a drop for me, and it seems like you dropped this book anyway along with all 20 of your other ones