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The Chimera System - Yuki The Last Chimera
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Yuki, a humanoid girl and the last Chimera left on the planet (although she doesn't know that) wakes up one day in a unfamiliar forest with no idea on how she got there, worst if all she doesn't know who she is or where she came from. Follow Yuki(snow in japenese) the last chimera and her traveling companion kawaii (cute in japenese) the Roaring Fox as they travel through a forest filled with secrets and it's fair share of dangers as they journey together to find out where they came from.
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Hey guys it's me, the author, oviously my review is pretty biased so if you don't mind leaving y'all own review then that would be great, I would love to have a outsiders point of view
I’m wondering if you guys know if this writer is still active, or what is a good place to read the whole stor.
Reading the few chapters this novel has right now (6), it has potential, the story is interesting as most non-human novels are for me, but there are some improvements to be done, the first thing is the grammar or sentence structure, don't get me wrong it is readable, but a few mistakes creep in here and there. And another is the wall of text, make paragraphs, it will be much more readable and easier for the eye to read it instead of the whole chapter being in one paragraph. I will stay tuned though and watch your progress in the near future. Keep it up!