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The A.I wars

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Penulis: Captain_doubloon

4.7 (12 peringkat)

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"Within every individual lies a dormant beast, concealed beneath the surface, carefully hidden as if it were nonexistent. Yet, in truth, it slumbers in a profound state of rest, waiting for the right moment to awaken."

In the year 3088, society is governed by AI practitioners, humans with the ability to control advanced artificial intelligences that enhance their skills. Jai Deshmukh, born into a prestigious family known for producing powerful A.I. masters, faces adversity due to having a seemingly weak A.I. companion in the form of a sparrow. Despite being looked down upon by his family, Jai remains determined to pursue his dream of becoming an A.I. master.

In pursuit of his goal, Jai decides to enroll in the Avian Academy of A.I. Practitioners. Here, he must navigate the challenges of proving himself with a seemingly inferior A.I., uncovering hidden potential within, and confronting the societal prejudices against those with unconventional A.I. companions. As Jai strives to awaken the dormant power within him, the narrative unfolds against the backdrop of a futuristic world where the true strength of individuals lies in their ability to awaken the dormant beasts within, even if society may judge them based on appearances.


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  1. Captain_doubloon
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Albinus_istamar

The plot of the novel has potential, the grammar is good, as for the writing style, my humble opinion is that if you want the story to be more fluid you should try to shorten the paragraphs and sentences a little, they are well written but sometimes it is difficult. the feeling that the story has not just started, not because of what happens but because of the format. Overall a good job that needs to grow and improve

1yr
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ToufiqUlAlam

Using A.I. as the central idea was a very fresh one. I loved how the story gives off a Pokémon vibe. I am a fan, so you know! The writing style is very nice too. Casual and personal—I love it. However, please use QuillBot or Grammerly to fix errors. I use QuillBot, which is the cheapest out there but very helpful. You will definitely love it. The fight and story progression are good too. But what I want to see is that the author can finish the story. There are so many abandoned stories on this platform. They have lost their masters. Please keep up the hope and keep writing till the end. Cheers!

1yr
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IKECARODEV

One word. Potential. This work could really go places. It's themes, characters and power system are top tier. I would highly recommend picking this up.

1yr
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Kiyoki_02

The idea and plot is complicated but you made it easy to understand. Kudos. It's like a pokemon but they used AI. Waiting for the next chapter.

7mth
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Rerian
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I love AI and I think the writing style is cool the way you put things in brackets. I don't have much experience reading wn but I got so many ideas reading this. thank you sm captain! keep updating, the story is good.

11mth
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ZelretchTheTaoist

C'est vraiment une histoire unique, c'est sûr. Cela lui donne de la profondeur et une touche agréable qui semble juste, eh bien. Vous avez un excellent style d'écriture et le rythme de l'histoire est également bon. Continuez votre travail !

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Kimchi_Kim16

The plot is eye catching and I love it! Even the narration which is unique to me and keeps me turning the page. The start at the first chapter also makes this novel a booking story!

1yr
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Noidwrite433

I'm thrilled with the captivating sci-fi elements, intriguing characters, and plot twists in the story! It's always exciting when a story keeps the readers on the edge of the seat. And thank you for the kind words about the grammar and overall quality. I really appreciate your good work, definitely keep up the good work! 😄📚

1yr
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Imagination_7

The story has potential , looking for further developments as story is unique keep up the work.👍

1yr
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Dreadfull_Dusk

It's really a unique story for sure. It gives it depth and nice touch that just seem right yk. You have great writing style and the pace of the story is good as well. Keep up the workk!

1yr
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Bago_Bago_5587

loved the synopsis and the genre seemed right up my alley and im loving this so far.♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ I cant explain how much I am OBSESSED with this book. I love the character development and the story depth is amazing, you can tell this book is written thoughtfully and with care!!

1yr
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Trayit008

good concept but need more work but i like it

1yr
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