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Target Beyond the Veil
4.72 (13 peringkat)
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After the war between the four races and demons ended 300 years ago, the races split into four domains. However, remnants of the conflict remained in the form of corrupted demonic beasts and dark forces that posed a continued threat to peace. To combat this, the four races invested in talented individuals to create new warriors.
Among them is the main character, who becomes embroiled in dangerous situations and shadowy organizations, and discovers shocking truths about himself and the world around him.
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As a first time writing a novel, I am grateful to anyone who takes the time to read my work. I welcome constructive criticism as it will undoubtedly help me improve my writing skills. edit: Scratch that, I'm being too humble . I deserve a five-star rating.
This was a interesting read. Characters: The characters are good, feel three dimensional and real. The mc is great too. Story development: The pace is a bit slow in the start but the interesting worldbuilding make up for it. Writing quality: It is good but there are some grammatical errors such as there is no capital letters at the start of paragraph. A rewrite would fix it. Overall, if you like fantasy with academy elements then you should give it a try. Good luck and keep up the great work.
Fantastic story line the world background is spectacular was hooked from the beginning, I don't usually read these sort of books but this was written very well. Excellent work author![img=update]
I'm going to take a break, I have a lot of work to do IRL and I've realized that the story requires significant adjustments. Nonetheless, I remain committed to finishing the story till the end. I will upload a new chapter whenever I have time but for now I'm going to focus on fixing the first chapters and my college work. Thanks for your support
I like this so far and the information about the world too. I could relate to the MC and I laughed a bit. I'm going to keep reading this one.
The story is insightful with a unique power ranking and practices of magic. I found the characters to be diverse with their own personalities. There are a few grammatical errors but the story makes up for it in its material. The pace seemed slow (but there are only 9 chapters). The author has a lot of potential and I look forward to the next upcoming chapters. Keep up the good work! 😊
This book is new yet. It has a lot of potential and mysterious. The start itself hooks ya. Surely, this book will be a hit cause the talent of the Mc is more than one would guess. Pretty interesting plot. The writing style is good and looks easy understanding. Great work author.
Nice book. I'm in love with the MC, she has been pleasant so far. The world background is fantastic and all that, hoping to see more updates. I give you a thumbs up Author 👍
I stand at six feet tall, with jet black hair and brown eyes. My dreams consist of becoming rich and having a harem. And, if I may add, I have been told by many that I am armed with handsomeness. note: I just wanted to add another 5-star review.
This is a very interesting story with interesting characters. The cover and description hooked me. I'll add it to my library. I hope to see more chapters.
nice background,so touching,you can really feel with the Mc kendis or as I like to call her ken for short.nice plot and have that solid backbone every good story should have .keep it up.Made me interested