onedaysomedayy

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Frances Ford :) | She/Her | Aspiring Writer | 🐉🌸🐇🌻 Author of DEVOUR (Mythicae and Astral Arts Academia) Chat with me on Discord! @onedaysomedayy#0114

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onedaysomedayy
onedaysomedayy
1 years ago
Replied to Drunken_Daoist

No, I suppose that would just be unfair. What a shame. 🤭

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onedaysomedayy
onedaysomedayy
1 years ago
Posted

I typically don't read novels like this (not a fan of 3rd POV), but I'm glad I took the time to read it. The female lead, well throughout imagery, and pace is divine. The concept of a Hunter ID is creative which provides a new take on this thread. I will say there are dialogue blunders that make it hard to know when a character is speaking, etc. But that doesn't take away from the worldbuilding or concept. The first handful of chapters shows Leaena as well-rounded with plenty of room to flourish in her journey. I look forward to future releases. Keep up the amazing work!

onedaysomedayy
onedaysomedayy
1 years ago
Posted

Elemental Tear is unique, showcasing a medieval fantasy-like world with mages, teras (brilliant creativity), and selected elemental-wielding heirs. The story follows the mc, Alex, who is discovered by the Church due to his fire abilities detected by the Orb. I'm usually not a fan of 3rd POV, but author delivered the narrative perfectly without repeating the same phrases etc. Keep up the good work!!

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onedaysomedayy
onedaysomedayy
1 years ago
Commented

Or, instead of omission, it’s fear.

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Alex's heart sank, and his spirit felt scarred by the undeniable sense of exclusion. The realization that he was perceived as lesser, unworthy of the same recognition as the others, left him questioning his own worth and place among the chosen heirs. The joy that had filled his heart earlier in the day now seemed distant and faint, replaced by a sense of isolation and despair.

Elemental Tear

Elemental Tear

Fantasy · DubiousTone

onedaysomedayy
onedaysomedayy
1 years ago
Commented

Hi there! Thank you so much for checking out Devour! I figured it was time to place a little announcement of sorts. If you haven't noticed, chapters have been updated recently instead of released. I wasn't thrilled with how I was portraying Verity and decided to revisit her territory. Verity’s POV is meant to explain the Coven and its political figures as well as the messages Callum left behind. If you’d like to check on the new versions, here's a list of chapters I’ve rewritten for Verity’s sake. Following chapters include: 8. Grief & Altitude 12. Divisions & Gnawing Aches 14. Elixir Me Not 16. An Arm for Luck (dialogue with Bellwether) 17. Paper-Thin I want to say thank you to the readers who have been so kind and accepting of my inactivity. I work full time, write when I make time, and had my first surgery on top of life events. It's been a spontaneous year for sure, but I hope I can continue releasing chapters in the near future. Be sure to check the author’s note for contact information as I’ve had a few reach out to me about the topic. Again, thank youu!

onedaysomedayy
onedaysomedayy
1 years ago
Posted

There are only 3 chapters so I'll update my review when the story progresses. The story itself has a lot of potential. There's an interesting power/strength regime for each character's supernatural abilities. Wish there was more chapters released for story context. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see how it goes.

onedaysomedayy
onedaysomedayy
1 years ago
Commented

The Draft

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onedaysomedayy
1 years ago
Commented

Very informative chapter!

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onedaysomedayy
onedaysomedayy
1 years ago
Replied to Junni_MC

Thank you for commenting! So glad to have you here. 😊

onedaysomedayy
onedaysomedayy
1 years ago
Commented

This is accurate. Rhea just experienced a traumatic (planned) attack from her ex. She knows he's willing to wait to get what he desires awhile still having control. She needs words of comfort. The last thing on her mind is revenge.

"Tell me! and I promise...He is going to pay double the price for what he did!." Kristine encouraged.

WRATH OF A SISTER

WRATH OF A SISTER

Urban · NobleRemmy

  • Devour (Mythicae and Astral Arts Academia) original

    Devour (Mythicae and Astral Arts Academia)

    Urban SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG VILLAIN ANTIHERO LEVELUP ACADEMY DRAGON URBAN SUPERNATURAL

    * WARNING; Strong dialect and violence * Flint Anderson was your average Mainer kid who spent his days selfishly for himself. Until his world fell apart. He discovers he’s not just a human when he sets a home ablaze, but half dragon. Struggling with his newfound abilities, Flint is sent to an academy for supernatural creatures hiding in plain sight from society across the country. Despite being half-human, Flint discovers that he’s seen as valuable among his peers. He’s determined to live his life as a human and dragon to honor his parents. Yet many dangers are lurking in the shadows while a naive dragonling is trying to find himself in a world he knew so little of. Two communities pin against him, and look for every way to tear him apart. Lies become truths, and promises become curses.

    25 Chs 34 Koleksi

  • EMBER (Reborn From Their Ashes) original

    EMBER (Reborn From Their Ashes)

    Fantasy R18 DARK SUPERPOWERS REVENGE WEREWOLF ROYALFAMILY THESTRONGACTINGWEAK PRINCESS ALPHA FAKEIDENTITY

    4.6

    MATURE CONTENT! Tiny Calaway is reaching her coming-of-age with a secret that carries devastating consequences. She must hide her abilities from those around her to protect her loved ones and herself- from a powerful alpha. If her secret is revealed, the life she's sacrificed for will be devoured in hungry flames along with the world. With the approaching Harvest Festivities, Tiny finds herself in the palm of a powerful man who's determined to break her. The two, an alpha and a commoner, become an unlikely duo when members begin to disappear days before the ceremony. Tiny knows something sinister is approaching, and she's set on finding her answers even if it's from the most unlikely candidate. .... Excerpt: A shudder escapes my lips. Chills shoot down my spine as I stare at a pair of foreign eyes. My reflection appears small at the sign of a charred woman. Her scorched skin rippled with sparking embers, and blistered lips curled into a snarl. The guilt of survival clawed my throat. For once in my life, I met a spirit clinging to my existence. A reminder that I surpassed the odds of death and cheated my fate. Whimpers erupt from my throat. My body is frozen in time while the sound of my blood swims in my ears. A cruel reminder of the curse I’ve been entrusted to dwell in. So many worthy individuals met their end while mine had only begun. A piercing pain burned through my skin as the enchanting woman placed her blackened fingertips into my shoulder. Her long nails dug into my flesh fiercely. Surges of blood stain the sink cabinets as tears sprung to my eyes- watching the young woman who used every last breath to cry into my ear. “Run!” Her touch sent me crumbling to the floor with a roaring pain in my temple. The last thing I remember is splintering door hinges and two pairs of feet before me. The bare-footed singed woman, and steel-toed boots of a powerful alpha.

    23 Chs 11 Koleksi

  • META original

    META

    Fantasy SUPERPOWERS VILLAIN ANTIHERO ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY RAREBLOODLINE MULTIPLELEADS BLOODPUMPING MUTATION

    Struggling to balance school life and her music career, Danielle is thrown into a facade as America's new super-heroine known as Bindi. Keeping her identity secret, she has to learn to conceal her powers to protect her loved ones and prevent utter despair. She's introduced to two awkward amateur superheroes like herself when her grandfather entrusts her to take his place as the protector of New York City and become the leader to the team META. Surrounded by the support of her teammates and the American people, she finds herself battling a villain named Nico with gecko-like powers whose only desire is to destroy America and everything she believes in. Becoming America's most wanted mutant- with his comrade Phoenix, Nico goes into hiding as his civilian self by the name Ivan. Struggling to obtain an uneventful life, he crosses paths with a classmate none other than the musically inclined pop star who turns his life upside down. As time unravels the dark hidden truths, a greater evil awaits in the shadows awaiting to clip the wings of a hero and desecrate humanity.

    14 Chs 2 Koleksi

  • Falling Grace original

    Falling Grace

    Fantasy MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG DARK TRAGEDY BETRAYAL FATEDLOVE ROYALFAMILY THESTRONGACTINGWEAK ARRANGEDMARRIAGE CHILDHOODSWEETHEARTS

    In a devastating turn of events, Ann Baskil discovers that not only has she been living a double life but that she’s a royal princess. And to make matters even stranger, her twin sister is to be executed for her death! Will Ann come to terms with her existence as well as her sister’s? Can the sisters put aside their traumas to save their people? Or is the resentment of “what could’ve been’’ too strong to repair seven years of injustice?

    4 Chs 3 Koleksi