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System Status: Online
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Dhvani voluntarily accepted the task of being a system. For a small chance to be reincarnated again, she aspires to level up and complete her task as soon as possible.
Ajay has everything. He is happy, and successful but inexplicably bound to a system that chatters in his mind. The system wants him to do tasks so it can level up and again, do more tasks. From being frustrated to enjoying, he changes gradually.
But can he do something for her that he would never want to? And will she really want to unbind when she remembers something from the distant forgotten past?
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A snippet from an upcoming chapter :
Dhvani stood in the endless white of the Memory Ocean waiting for his answer. He looked at her for a long time and ruthlessly rejected her.
"We were never meant to meet. You should remember your duties as well."
He left her there and he never saw her again. Did he regret his parting words? Yes. But can he change anything? He hoped so.
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A request to readers:
Please tell me how you feel about the story in the comments so I can improve my writing. Thank you for reading! There may be mistakes in my writing and you can tell me.
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I feel bad for the MC because even after death they have to spend their life working and trying to be popular, haha! I think that's actually my favorite thing about the story so far, how the "new world" isn't automatically easy, its more like a second shot at life with cooler stakes!
Dhvani appeared to have a bubbly character who is full of curiosity and a lovable character! The plot of the story is interesting considering she is signing up for a reason and not a "dump on you" thingy. Keep it up, author!
Your writing quality is really good. I've never been love with any book like yours. waiting for the next chapter.
The story was very engaging! The author has a really strong foundation for their characters and a strong storyline. I really enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good work author!
5 chapters! It's time for a review! I love how the story's going, how the two leads started off slow and not went full romantic mode or flirty right away. It's really my fav type of relationship. Love how the two of them literally live together as system and host also! 😂 And each chapter is long and the writing is quite detailed which I can only say "Good job!" Added this to my library! 💖
Ok, so first off, you really need to work on your sentence structure. i feel like it is way too short or long at times. it almost in a way feels super stiff. other than that, the premise is defenitely unique, at least for me, since i havent really read ay system POV novels. The whole change the world end goal is kinda vague, but the system trying to find a way to retire is cool. But you have barely any grammar mistakes and the story could go many ways so i feel like it could definitely work if executed properly. keep writing ✍️
The way the author writes gives us a reason to root for the MC and it keeps us intrigued as time goes on, not letting us go from its suspense.
I love the way the author has introduced the characters. I personally like the main character, she seems to have a likeable personality. Keep up the work author!
I hadn't really tried this genre before. And it surely didn't disappoint. I really liked the character building. The plot is also captivating. I am looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍
Amazing Story!! I love to read more about it, interesting characters very realistic and Relatable, You have done a great job author, Such a beautiful book you have composed, Sending you a power stone as an appreciation regarding this Awesome book
Very nice concept I like how your thinking of something new very nice story hope you improve as the story goes on and keep up the good work author
So the story started off with a great beginning, amazing concept and very well written, I loved the characters and the way they behave with each other, overall I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story, great work author ❤️❤️❤️❤️
This story is so different from the usual ones i read.And its so interesting that you cant actually stop either. Dhvani is so bubbly and cute while Ajay almost seems the opposite. I can't wait to see how these both will go ahead.I would highly recommend you in reading it.
I enjoyed this piece of prose. I never felt like I wanted to skip ahead. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more from you. The struggles of the protagonist felt realistic in scope. I decided to read to at least half way before leaving my review. Good luck in future.
The story was very engaging! The author has a really strong foundation for their characters and a strong storyline. I really enjoyed reading it!