EternityPlum

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2022-03-16 Bergabung Global
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EternityPlum
EternityPlum
2 years ago
Posted

The way you write your characters is very interesting indeed. The mystery, the wonder, the seven regalia? The title of the novel caught my interest when I read it for the first time. It had me asking questions. Why are there 7 of them? Are there 7 kingdoms? Your writing constantly makes me want to read more of it, akin to a pathogen spreading through my mind. Positive context don't worry. Good luck on your future endeavors.

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EternityPlum
EternityPlum
2 years ago
Posted

Compared to the usual reincarnation romp you'd expect from the genre this book is a breath of fresh air. Great work so far Xuckless. I look forward to more, especially considering the recent developments in the story. I do like a good antihero. No spoilers though. :)

EternityPlum
EternityPlum
2 years ago
Posted

Good story so far. Fast paced and full of interesting things. If you keep at this pace I think you have some pretty good potential for success. The chapters are short and sweet. Which is good for those who don't like to read long things. Good job so far, keep up the good work.

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EternityPlum
EternityPlum
2 years ago
Replied to Cameron90000

Only via conquering that which controls reality may one truly attain a power worth bragging about.

EternityPlum
EternityPlum
2 years ago
Replied to Cameron90000

One man's armour is another man's obstruction.

EternityPlum
EternityPlum
2 years ago
Posted

An interesting story so far. I liked the character of Reena. Chapter 3 was quite a surprise, though I'll remain impartial. Very well described writing. I'll add this to my library to read any future chapters.

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EternityPlum
EternityPlum
2 years ago
Commented

Is it now?

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"My throat is pretty dry, I think I'll eat them after I get something to drink."

iwjejeejue

iwjejeejue

LGBT+ · VIRANDESIX

EternityPlum
EternityPlum
2 years ago
Commented

Plain is indeed best.

Paragraf ini telah dihapus.
iwjejeejue

iwjejeejue

LGBT+ · VIRANDESIX

EternityPlum
EternityPlum
2 years ago
Commented

Me too! This made me chuckle.

'...I love this nice ass wood floor.'

iwjejeejue

iwjejeejue

LGBT+ · VIRANDESIX

EternityPlum
EternityPlum
2 years ago
Commented

A rhetorical question. I must use those more. Wonderful

Sugar, it's quite addictive, no?

iwjejeejue

iwjejeejue

LGBT+ · VIRANDESIX