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Soulmates: A Life After Death
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Luna: She had returned from UK. It had been one week and everything was going well......
if only that wretched night hadn't happened. A fire that night had swollowed her parents and pride. When she awakened, she found out that her parents had been murdered and she had been raped.
Arthur: He is a capable business man and heir of Brown corporati. Their family is one of the most powerful in the country. He was a warm person but his position and responsibilities turned him cold and ruthless.
In their first meeting, when he saw her she was looking pale and soulless. Unconsciously he found himself drowned in her deep ocean like black eyes. The pain he could feel emanating from her made him fall for her.
This story is about Arthur and Luna. How he fixes his broken girl and how she takes her
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It sounds like it could be a really good story, unfortunately the english is so bad that I couldn't bear to read past the first few chapters. It is badly in need of an editor. I understand inglish is not the fist language of all the authors here, however, if you are going to write a book in english it needs to be understandable to the audience. If you were to find someone to edit the story into a more readable version, I'd happily leave a higher review. I would give examples of the wrong or non-existent words used, but there are too many and often I couldn't figure out which word you were trying to use. I hope you don't find this review too offensive or discouraging, as I am sincerely trying to give constructive criticism and would really enjoy giving this book a read when it doesn't have so many language problems.
Just amazing with all this character. I like this story to much... Day by day its going to intresting. Keep writing and plz upload more chapter fast....