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Just amazing with all this character. I like this story to much... Day by day its going to intresting. Keep writing and plz upload more chapter fast....
It sounds like it could be a really good story, unfortunately the english is so bad that I couldn't bear to read past the first few chapters. It is badly in need of an editor. I understand inglish is not the fist language of all the authors here, however, if you are going to write a book in english it needs to be understandable to the audience. If you were to find someone to edit the story into a more readable version, I'd happily leave a higher review. I would give examples of the wrong or non-existent words used, but there are too many and often I couldn't figure out which word you were trying to use. I hope you don't find this review too offensive or discouraging, as I am sincerely trying to give constructive criticism and would really enjoy giving this book a read when it doesn't have so many language problems.
Just amazing with all this character. I like this story to much... Day by day its going to intresting. Keep writing and plz upload more chapter fast....
It sounds like it could be a really good story, unfortunately the english is so bad that I couldn't bear to read past the first few chapters. It is badly in need of an editor. I understand inglish is not the fist language of all the authors here, however, if you are going to write a book in english it needs to be understandable to the audience. If you were to find someone to edit the story into a more readable version, I'd happily leave a higher review. I would give examples of the wrong or non-existent words used, but there are too many and often I couldn't figure out which word you were trying to use. I hope you don't find this review too offensive or discouraging, as I am sincerely trying to give constructive criticism and would really enjoy giving this book a read when it doesn't have so many language problems.