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Your typical office worker dies and finds himself within the world of Naruto. How will he live? Come and find out
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القصة نفسها جيدة قي البداية الشخصيات جامدة لكن بدأ المؤلف يتحسن هناك بعض الارباك حيث يتكلم عن امور غريبة ويدخلها في القصة واكن المتخوى والفكرة مذهلة اعتقد بعد تحسنه لو يعيد تحريرها ستصبح قصة خارقة أشكرك على مجهودك الرائع The story itself is good at the beginning, the characters are rigid, but the author began to improve, there is some confusion where he talks about strange things and introduces them into the story, and I was the one who was afraid, and the idea is amazing, I think after his improvement, if he re-edits it, it will become a superhero story, Thank you for your wonderful effort
I've never read such ridiculous fan fiction in my life, this is a waste of time author, I'm telling you, go suffocate yourself with tofu 🗡️🗡️🗡️🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
Good but fast pace ☑️⬆️↗️➡️↘️↖️↕️↔️↩️↪️⤴️⤵️⤵️🔃🔃🔄🔙🔛🔝🔚🔜🔜🆕🆕🆓🆙🆙🆒ℹ️🅿️🈁🈂️🈳🔣🔤🔡🔢🔢7️⃣8️⃣8️⃣8️⃣8️⃣0️⃣0️⃣🔟💠🔷🔷🔹🔹🔹🔣#️⃣*️⃣🈁#️⃣🔡🔠
Can't take it any more, didn't understand what was going on. He is inside glass tank in every chapter but how did he get in, is someone experimenting on him?? is he reborn?? is he uchiha ??? is he senju ?? did he reincarnate once or twice ???? Story is a complete mess ?????.