This fanfiction is really bad. The writer knows what’s going to happen but still follows a conventional path. The character is very cowardly and foolish; he cries for those who died because he didn’t prevent a foreseeable event. To the friend who wrote this fanfiction, I think you’re failing. I suggest you write another fanfiction.
First of all, this fan fiction might be one of the top five fan fictions I've read. So please don't abandon this story; I eagerly look forward to the new chapters.
Who will MC marry?
Firstly, will Vaegon marry one of his sisters, or will he marry the daughter of another Westerosi lord's family? Could you let me know, dear writer?
Good
I think he should be reborn in the body of his own grandchildren when he dies. This way, the story becomes more meaningful, as he is a master of magic.
First of all, I don’t understand why you’re portraying the protagonist as constantly selfish and narrow-minded. If the story continues in this way, it will end very quickly, just so you know, my fellow writer.
GOT : Unfettered Targaryen
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