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Sasuke: The Ultimate Shinobi
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You know the process, a guy died and then transmigrated as Sasuke in Naruto world. As he continues his journey to the world of fantasy, he discovered many things that weren't mentioned in the anime/manga. To prepare for the upcoming 4th great ninja war, he utilised his knowledge to his advantage. But now that this is his new reality, he can only change a bit of the story as to not cause unintentional diversion in the story line until he achieve his "godhood" or something close to that.
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A/N: I will not divert too much on the cannon story line, so for those who are looking for the story that wants something very new or different from the original story, this is not for you.
Anyway, the updates are random since I don't want to put pressure on my self. I'm just a guy who doesn't have anything meaningful to do so I tried writing.
Disclaimers: I don't own any of the characters in this novel, it belongs to their respective and rightful author and writer of Naruto/Boruto.
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well if you want a canon retelling of original Naruto with a slightly stronger Sasuke this is the novel for you. grammar is good at least...
Good fanfic but you made sasuke really kind which destroyed old saukes development. It will take a lot of correcting to make him awaken his sharigans
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Consider a long time before giving my rating. The story isn't bad, it has a lot of nice details like for example the change in Zabuza's defeat, you didn't wait for Kakashi to be caught. Instead you wrote a pretty good fight scene. There are few negative points, like for example the time jump, sometimes it's too sudden and you don't add enough narrative content before doing it. For example the 7 days of training, you could have had a conversation with his team, by skipping that it feels like Naruto and Sakura don't exist, also Sasuke looks like a robot. You're still a novice writer, so there's a lot of room for improvement. Your fanfic is already better than most. Now I'd like to contribute my two cents: There is an easy and reasonable way for Sasuke to awaken the Mangekyo, he could regain the memories about the massacre (maybe he's confused, but I understand he doesn't remember or lost Sasuke's feelings for his family) It seems like a very strong emotional punch to me. He could copy the raikage's chakra mode and combine it with susano.