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Rokushiki User In MHA [END]
4.02 (11 peringkat)
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To the reader; if you cannot understand what I write then you are free to comment, and I won't be correcting the chapters from 3 to 10. because when I write I don't see if my grammar is a mistake I only focus on the story and this won't change
What sort of hero do you want to be?
Like All Might who just break the whole surrounding with an AOE attack? NO
Then like Gran Torino who flies and brings down heroes with his kick? No
Tora who had the knowledge of various anime and his thought to bring Rokushiki to a new height decided to take both ways but also Neither
The story never ends
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The idea is amazing, but the character and character interactions are garbage. Nice idea bad execution, quirk apprehension test he for some reason holds back.. when he can test his limits and understand how to grow.. he's meddling in things that don't concern him he's an attention seeking whore..
good story though but not for me........................................................................................................................................
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to be honest i am very interested in this story because of the powers,yet the grammar and other little things threw me off,and make me can't focus on the story,i suggest u hire a good beta coz this shit is a gold covered dirt and needs a lot of refinement to shine
Bad syntax, awkward and wrong punctuation, and even more awkward character interactions. Idea is pretty cool just not very well executed.
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nice one. But I wonder, why did you finish the story? You can continue writing. But I love it.
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finally a story where the mc is not op and not teaching his skills to other people. i don't mind the occasional advice to others as long as it's from canon and he is just speeding up their discovery and not giving them special advices that they never would have thought in the canon.