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Power
1.Unlimited Power of Destruction 2.Perfect control
3.Tom Riddle's Magic Talent, and lot of Magical Energy
Orphan trope
Harem
1.Nymphadora Tonks
2.Luna Lovegood
3.Fleur Delacour
4.Daphne Greengrass
5.Astoria Greengrass
6.Hermione Granger
Summary:
MC is OP as fk but don't act cold towards people he care and actually listens to them (beta naive mc)
He is Heir of an ancient noble family.
A lot of MC's ass kissing, cringe af, ya this is it.
I won't recommend you reading this shit. There are way way better ff available on webnovel read those than wasting your time here.
why am I writing this then?
cause I'm a fking loser. You're not right?
sorry just got upset due to criticism. Ahh I should just delete this shit and do something productive with my life.
You can't satisfy everyone. some like Hermione, some hate her to guts. fking idiots.
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Tulis ulasanMC is a braggart Gary Stu young master and everyone else is relegated into three categories: bootlicker, girlfriend(or potential girlfriend) or enemy. If you like that kind of thing this is for you. I used to like this kind of thing and while itโs lost itโs appeal long ago for me Iโm sure there are those who enjoy it. Lol MC is on the left, other characters are suit guy and author is on the right๐๐๐:
its too cringe. reads like a wattpad novel where the mc immediately goes to Gringotts and gets a bunch of noble titles and lordships. mc is addressed with 5 noble names or something at his sorting as he "struts forward confidently to the sorting hat as he is destined for greatness" ok bro, everything was handed to you congrats. everything is designed to make the mc look cool or mature but it doesn't work, he just seems like a delusional retard
It's bad. Very bad. Like scraping the bottom of a barrel with a broken rusty spoon bad. 1 star for writing quality, story development and character design, and thats cause I can't give any less. 2 stars for world background and thats just because Rowling already gave something to work with. 4 stars for stability of updates, though if the author will keep it up or simply drop it remains to be seen. 1.8 stars in total.
I'm Loving this so much it has great WQ, SU, SD, CD, WB, and everything thanks author so lets give this author around of applause and I will contiue to love this from now and in the future.
The fanfic novel is cringe, is Wattpad novel. MC femboy -> Gringott -> Mc femboy + billionaire + owner of old families -> end. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
THAT'S ON MY TOP 3 FIC OF ALL TIME !!! no seriously this fic is fucking good (and you said you were 17 so i'm impressed ! (you did better than me at writing fic and i'm only 1 year older than you) anyway good luck and hope your life will be good in the future so you can continue this fic ๐
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great story it would be interesting to see that the main character takes his family to the world of charmed to get defensive powers
Apesar do personagem principal ser do tipo que nรฃo enfrenta grandes problemas para resolver algo, serve como um interessante livro passatempo.
muy buen ff, me gusta como va quedando :3 Ojalรก lo pueda terminar muchacho gracias por los caps y suerte
Do you think MC is a betta? then I donโt know what you think is alpha! MC destroyed Snape and turned him gay! MC takes what he wants, when he wants! MC is the favorite of the world and the Main Hero and as soon as he takes a step, girls and power rush into his hands!
A good story, not the best out there but definitely not the worst. Thanks for the story so far and keep it up.
It is little cringe but only because i have read Lot of fanfics before but decelopment is good not fast or slowโฆ i think great story if you want to Just relax and not read something on witch you have to focus
It's a really fun story if you don't really get into the series and it holds your attention, I'd say it's worth reading. I think if it were written seriously it would be an epic story.
Do you know why great works like HP, Lotm, Got....are so successful.... That's because of balance. If you notice these works, you won't find a perfect MC who gets everything he wants and always does the right thing. And all the world revolves around it. And do you know why? Because the reader will not be able to get attached to the MC because there is nothing in common between them so that he can put himself in MC place and live the ROLE (English is not my first language )
Penulis Agwinz
I like your idea of naming him Peverell since the Peverells are one of the oldest families in the Wizarding World and Everyone knows which family is the true master of Deathly Hallows.๐