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Reincarnated as Bella Swan's Brother (Twilight)
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After his death, Alex is taken before 'God', where he receives three wishes and starts his life in the world of the Twilight movies.
Writing this story once more on this new account.
*Disclaimer*
This story will be long, and while the main character receives wishes, he isn't going to be some giga chad right from the beginning, it will involve character development.
No Harem btw.
This story is planned to last at least 200 chapters, so grab a bunch of popcorn and sit tight.
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For ten advanced chapters and to support me so I can live check Patreon at: patreon.com/WhiteAuthor
This story will be posted on RoyalRoad, Fanfiction net and ScribbleHub.
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This is rough to read. Not to bad of a story overall. For a twelve year old with adhd. The author is unfortunately someone young and doesn’t know how to put a mature mindset into his writing. Which is understandable but still it makes the novel hard to read with the MC being very immature and super childish along with all of the other characters. If your young you’ll like this story and everyone is best of friends.
... well, the MC constantly does and thinks about silly things, the worst thing is that if that were the only case, it would be possible to characterize only MC as childish, but everyone acts stupid along with him. The problem is not being childish, but knowing that people don't act like that, unfortunately...
Author, everything is great with you. Don't abandon your readers; I can't stand unfinished fanfics anymore. I'm almost giving up on reading because of this. Your story is incredible! Just one thing: if you're going to do a harem, please make it make sense, hahaha.
The ADHD on this mc is very intense... I really love twilight fics, but I'd hard to read when the Mc can't focus on anything for more than 100 words :/
Honestly, the story itself is not that bad BUT i just cant stand the MC, i would stay away from anyone like him irl, i feel like he has mental impairment.
I really want to like this fic, but I've come to realize that even with so many chapters coming out. A lot of them have nothing of importance going on. If he combined maybe 2-3 chapters together, it might help and make paying for a chapter actually worth it. This story so far has been extremely casual and maybe slice of life-ish(not sure if im using that right). Something interesting might happen one chapter and then nothing for the next few after. It feels way too slow. I dont know how to feel about the mc. He's not terrible, but he has his glaring flaws, which can be annoying.
A great novel that keeps me coming back for more and more. The Mc actually acts intelligent and does flaunt or show off his powers to others exposing his secret and the author made the original book characters not the exact same way of thinking and acting like in the books making the characters seem more lively.
Love it. Please don't drop it..... 🙏 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Estou ansioso pelo próximos capítulos, Gostei muito de como vc criou o MC, fiquei intriganto com os personagens e ansioso pra ver o Alex ainda mais forte
Good job bro i dont wanna sound like your mom but make sure to get some rest and some sun anyway just keep it up your doin good. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood jooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooob
the story itself is great. as a twilight fanfiction what else to do you expect from a teenage drama. but the problem is the MC. got a very big problem with his personality and always on inner retrospect shit. so yeah. got discouraged reading it.
Good morning, writer. I hope everything is going well with you. I just wanted to ask if the story is going to continue at this slow pace. Now, I’m not complaining, but we’re 35 chapters in, and the story hasn’t really started yet. I’m just a bit worried because I’ve read so many stories like this where the writer keeps delaying the plot, and by the time it’s supposed to start, they give up on writing it altogether. But thank you for continuing the story—it really brightens our days.
Has some hiccups in regards to things like redundancies and run-on sentences, ESPECIALLY in the first few chapters, but otherwise, this is a great fanfiction with fast updates to keep you engaged. Characters are written in compelling ways, and I really love the family dynamics. The story hasn't gotten into the "meat and potatoes" yet, but what it has given is gripping enough to make me want to invest time into following this story. 4.4*
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I have really enjoyed this story! I hope you don't drop it like so many others are apt to do.
Good but still nothing important till now, after more than 90 chapters ....... .......... ...... .....
So I used to have this big review for myself, but I decided to delete it and just say this: I'm a cool dude. Read the Fanific. Yeeahh that's all.