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Reiki Recovery : I am The Destiny Villain
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[This Novel is dropped.]
Liam was reincarnated into a world, where 100 year's ago reiki recovery was started.
Here strong can do anything, rules are only for weak.
At the beginning with him was a system, and he choose to be a villain at the beginning.
Even though he could be a protagonist and even could live his life as a ordinary person.
Why did he still choose villain at the beginning.
Is it really his an simple choice or was there a fate in the dark???
But when he knows the cause of his reincarnation and recovered some of his memories.
He looked at the sky as if his eyes could see an certain universe.
He laughed while his purple eyes flashed with a red colour and said "Even though I was failed but this demon is still alive hahaha."
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THIS NOVEL IS SLICE OF LIFE FIRST.
AFTER THAT THIS CAN BE CALLED A VILLAIN TYPE NOVEL.
IN MY NOVEL MAIN CHARACTER WILL BECAME CRUEL BUT THAT IS FROM SECOND VOLUME.
**THIS NOVEL CONTAINS INCEST.**
**NO NTR.**
**NO YURI.**
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The book cover isn't mine, if you're the artist behind this masterpiece, and you want me to take it down! I would gladly do it, just inform me in my latest chapters on the comments!
Cover illustration credit on Pixiv : unknown
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Author everything is Good I like this Novel Even Spennded some coins but there is only one this is lacking it is Dialogue there are no dialogue it's like you are writing a Essay. If you would have written some dialogue first volume would have more chapters. Although I am not saying why you ended Protagonist very fast but Try Adding More dialogue now that you have Contract also
the story is unbelievably boring, the first arc was good but now in that other world everything was boring there is no plot advance, that torture of the supreme 5 was absurd, about 6 chapters lost in that meaningless torture, just kill them and Done, another important thing, the villain looks like a beta protagonist letting himself be commanded and manipulated by his women, another point is that the dialogues of his "harem" (only 2 women) are so flat that they seem robotic, anyway, I hope that this third arc is better written and adds more women to the harem and doesn't make their conversations so flat and robotic postscript: If you delete the review I will repost it
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First of all The story has great potential, the villain mc was great and the plot was fantastic. Now hereโs the problem Many words not wording correctly Hard to understand unless you read MLT before and even then it is hard to understand. I suggest rewriting it and fixing many of the grammer mistake. Also I get that you are trying to make the mc overpowered and started taking everything (former)mc would have before(former) mc gets it but give the (former mc) some chance. Destorying them before they start to get stronger is good and all, But giving them hope and chance then crushing them (Imp) is better Take his (future wife) infront him then taking them before they meet or slowly destorying everything they build then finally killing them ๐ Well overall I really wanted to give 3.5/5 but I just canโt >.< sorry
There are very few harem members, that's why I give it a low score. I love harem?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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