Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket [DROPPED]

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Jasonenrick

Writing Quality- 5-Stars Stability of Updates - 4-Stars Story Development 2-Star Character Design 1-Star World Backgound 2-Star Okay, so I Think the First two are self explaining so I won't explain my why I set 5-and 4-Stars! Story Development is good and was good but there is no Goal for me in the Novel and I don't get why this Novel exists! So he has 3 wishes , is reincarnated in his Favourite Novel and loses against the Mc's of the Story,....would makes Sense!But!But, what will he do now that he lost against them when they were at their weakest! He loses All the matches in the middle school against Teiko ! So he can never say" I Played against the GOM and won" No, he won't ever be able to do that! My dream would be to beat them in a fair and regular match if I were to reincarnate in my Favourite Novel, that would be everyones Dream! Won't be possible now,aye? Bascially there is nothing for the Mc to do in the Novel , for me atleast ! Maybe Romance but that's it ! The Character makes no Sense as well and he is kinda Stupid! He makes no OP wishes so that it won't be easy but a hard! But now what?? He loses and his whole Peropose for being in that World isn't there anymore ! Like I said before, Why do people love hard games...because it taste even better If you win against your enemy Team If they are good and not Bad! Well doesn't Matter anymore now ,aye? Well, I just end it here, I get really frustated writing this because my Auto correction is driving me insan😠😠😠🥴🥴😵😵 [ My Opinion ] I don't get why you write this ....there is no fun in it, no logic and the only way it can get worse If Riko Aida is going to be his girlfriend !

Pretty good so far, hope it doesn't become some harem fanfic like so many of these become nowadays. Recommend this to ppl who want to read knb fanfics for sure, writing quality is really good as well, easy to understand, don't need to guess when reading at some parts what the author might have meant. Also interesting original content. The main character doesn't seem bland, for now, hope it stays that way.

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G0dakun

3 cheats from gods + many years of training + the throne + knowledge about the GOM yet he still lose not once but twice... MC has many advantage from the start yet when facing teiko, all was wasted. MC knows the weakness of every miracles since he was reincarnated, the god impulse cheat being nerf when facing akashi, top body cheat yet he fatigue, dude MC is training when he was still a kid, aside from aomine, i dnt know if every miracles train when they are still kid, murasakibara cant make freethrow yet you made him 3point for buzzerbeater... The throne, i thought he will now touch the ZONE yet you make him fatigue.. After this, another training arc will be happening, you say this will be turning point, like waht the fuqqq, another training again then still lose. Great from the start, but eventually become a cannon fodder, 3 cheats wasted, training wasted, knowledfe wasted, this is totally a waste of time

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Denis_Barbosa

I probably should put my thoughts on a single comment. 1. Shun team shouldn't be that weak considering that they won the previous championship and have a uncrowned king. So that against the undeveloped Generation of Miracles stomp in the third quarter shouldn't really happen. 2. In the manga, I think their first finals only have a point difference of 30 points but in the third quarter that 4 point lead for Shun's team suddenly became a 26 point difference against his team is a drastic change and a huge especially with the previous noted team. 3. Shun literal lost through a bouncing ball plot. Just what. It's wasn't a special awaken ability from any of the member s. It was just a lucky shot from the guy who's has one of the least amount of experience with a 3 pointer beside Kuroko. I would rather have him lose from non luck special ability awakening than a lucky plot shot. 4. Where's the development?! No special abilities that are unlock or really display of great feats. I thought there would be special awakenings. Like zone or emperor eye or the other abilities that the GOM have from pushing each other and pasting their limits or something but it seems to be just a regular game. 5. I think the comments already said this enough but losing against Teiko now means he can't win for the rest of middle school logically unless you have American team talent next year in Shun's team. This makes it a little infuriating considering the circumstance that is in the game and later down the plot. I know this is your fanfic and I don't know what you plan on doing but I don't think this is a good release.

LV 5

Reynerio1996

What is the use of giving him powers if he is not going to use it, he could not even beat a team where he is in his initial moments with a champion team, this story had a good rhythm, I will read again when I want to read a mc that does not use its powers and that he's a loser

LV 3

90_99

just started using this platform but damn i didn't know that the top fanfics here is **** after all of those wishes he got he still lose? and i've read that the author wants it to be "realistic" a guy reincarnated to another world is already unrealistic so wtf is the author talking about?

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kwertyu

the mc fucking suck can't even win against GOM in their middle school what's the point for all of those cheats he got if he can't even use it DONT READ THIS PIECE OF SHIT

LV 1

Logan179

that desepicao nothing in this story makes sense the MC and Op but loses and the worst the miraculous generation was in its weak but the MC is simply useless

LV 11

Crowws

We have a reincarnated MC who wishes 3 cheats that he doesn't even use to the full potential against under develop GOM. The fact you nerf his team in the finals who by the way the last year champion suddenly useless having them playing like a canon fodder just for PLOT fkn hell. I can't see where this story will go since it's literally impossible for the MC to win the next 2 yrs. Sigh~

LV 4

LoweCypher

Why don't you write an Aki no Sora or whatever fanfic instead, since you love self-inserting yourself with an OP character that is made to lose. You must love NTR so much that you decided to to that kind of style in this, huh? Quite the effort I must say. I said before, once is enough, you already degraded team play, took out GSI and even had a lucky shot for the first. Now you say it is exhaustion? Bruh, who are you joking with? Hinting? You were hyping, Tired? The guy is more athletically strong although slightly less than Murasakibara, would be able to even tire the other four and you just suddenly cut him off like that. Your excuse is you have two scenarios with the first being him being tired out. It was already obvious you didn't have any plan for him to even win as that statement is already basically you telling us "He MUST lose no matter what". Even if you chose the first option, it will still be BS. did the GoM get tired when the MC is pressuring them to play harder to keep up? Of course not, you canon wimping writer. Because that is "realistic". The worse part about this scenario is for those who keep defending this when their own opinion is just simply to justify this twisted "realistic" scenario and the man responsible for this is just chilling away because he know he has "Dumb minions" to protect his ego. That is it. There's really no point is staying with a novel that would only satisfy immature people. Good bye and good riddance. P.S. Do note, I am aware how authors are allowed to delete review, but that only applies to spams and should not be abused to keep a good reputation. Do be aware that this post will be my last bit respect to the author. If he does have any sensibility that is.

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AS9

Trash. Mc is nothing but a glorified loser. He gets wishes from god himself, trains like hell everyday, is already aware of gom and their abilities and still goes out and loses every year.

LV 4

Torafor

He want to REINCARNATED in the KNB makes OP WISHES like GOD IMPULSE that like reacts super fast that even 1 sec is not the limit and a PERFECT COPY LIKE KISE THEN "TRAINS" TO ANAYLSE,RESTRUCTURE ETC. SO HE CAN USE IT BUT AUTHOR RESTRICTS OR NERFED PERFECT COPY SO FCK THE SO CALLED "LOGIC" LOL A GOD,REINCARNATION,FANFIC etc. YOU WANT LOGIC LOL! BUT THE OTHER PROBLEM IS THE BODY BUT HE GOT THE 3RD WISH THE BODY TALENT (HE MODIFIED IT SO HOW CAN HE NOT USE IT FULLY LMAO) SO HOW CAN HE NOT USE ITS SO BAD SO FORCED so HELLO AUTHOR DID YOU FORGOT IT YOU EVEN SAID AND WRITE IT YOURSELF SO DON'T DENY IT AND PASSION HE HAD IT HE COULD'VE UNLOCKED ZONE IN THE LAST MOMENT BECAUSE OF PRESSURE, USING HIS FULL POWER AND POTENTIAL TO WHAT HE CAN BECAUSE HE GO OFFENSE AND DEFENSE AT THE SAME TIME AND NERFING THE TEAM THAT THE MC ONLY NEED TO GO OFFENSE LIKE HELLO UNCROWNED KING WITH A SPECIAL ABILITY UNLOCKED CAN'T EVEN SCORE LMAO! WHY CAPS BECAUSE YOU IDIOTS CAN'T SEE THE REASON WHY AUTHOR USES LOGIC BUT USES LUCK LOL! FCK OFF BOOTLICKERS.

LV 1

JamesBlack

Even with cheats and the GM still green and he lost this right here is a useless MC no matter what anyone says! Even with cheats and the GM still green and he lost this right here is a useless MC no matter what anyone says! Even with cheats and the GM still green and he lost this right here is a useless MC no matter what anyone says!

LV 1

AnotherFiction

Author is half-assed man, i mean,, here is what he want from the third wish in the prologue chapter _______For my final wish, i would like to adjust my physique to my prefferences. Third wish was extremely important because if he didn't have the body to fully utilize the first two gifts, then there was no meaning in using precious wishes to obtain them_______~prologue but, he collapse because of his third wish doesn't work, and the Masochist Author claimed that it was too tiring for MC to use his first two gifts in the game against GOM. Is that your fuc***g prefference? You smoking man? is this your so called fiction? or.. "half-assed fiction" wake up you masochist!!!, don't bring your suffering in real life to your reader.

LV 2

_Medeiros

Honestly you give extremely op skills to the MC and make him train every day to give him a team with good players and even after all this you lose him in an idiotic wayHonestly you give extremely op skills to the MC and make him train every day to give him a team with good players and even after all this you lose him in an idiotic wayHonestly you give extremely op skills to the MC and make him train every day to give him a team with good players and even after all this you lose him in an idiotic way

LV 5

lightbringer_007

Not gonna lie...I am really disappointed with the author...come on map 3 wishes...good team..but...still man I am out...this drop so low for me....that I don't wanna come and see..the training arc..which in my opinion is waste of time...u should skip to High school...bcoz in third year mc will lose again....so bye..all the best author....not my cup of tea...

LV 3

Skorzeur

Teikō winning because of luck dropped the quality of the FAN-FIC. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Simply the story and very slow Mc has very op skills and even he literally trained every day he simply loses the worst ending that makes the MC seem useless

LV 10

DeadOverlord666

Actually amazing so far. Great grammar and way better than the other Kuroko story ranked higher. I see a lot of potential in this moving towards future chapters. Hope you can continue the story and not drop it. Keep it up.