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Reality Bender System, Marvel
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Embark on a journey alongside Emelia as a bored god whimsically transports her to another universe, or perhaps even a multiverse. In this intriguing realm, she encounters a myriad of characters from diverse backgrounds. Immerse yourself in the excitement of Emelia's adventure as she grapples with her 'Reality Bending System' and unravels the enigmas of the extraordinary realm unfolding before her.
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Hello there I'm the Author, this is my first time writing fan-fiction, please let me know what I can improve at!
Also, to let you all know, this will be done in my spare time when i am not busy with RL stuff! I hope you all enjoy!
FYI: I do not own Harry Potter or any other pre-existing novels/ works that i use within my Fan-Fiction.
This does have a Harem, it will be purely Yuri though.
(Since people have been complaining i am adding this to say that this is inspired by 'The Fallen Gamer'... They have accused me of Plagiarism, so, just to let you guys know I am not stealing from the other author only using some of the ideas and basic themes with a sprinkling of some of the same events early on in the story; mainly because they are some of the best and easiest to start from; even these I have made changes to.)
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looks great so far! the mc is cool story is nice abd the system is kind of unique
nah it not stail it actually pretty great story😁 so so pretty please continue your amazing work author🥺 ps. and don't let no one read this part I might get hate mail for this but I have say this author I like story but you need get some rest maybe a few days or a week. it can't be writing new characters everyday you need sleep.
Pretty decent OP MC with system story so far. MC seems to lack all critical thinking skills and is unable to do basic tasks without advice from her system. MC is also quite a fangirl for the other characters, but that is understandable, you would be lying if you said you wouldn’t be in awe upon seeing the real life Harry Potter. Other than the MC’s lack of backbone it’s pretty well written and not too nonsensical so far
The way other characters interact with the protagonist is weird they seem to gain trust in the Mc way to fast and fall in love with her to point where their holding hands and passionately making out after knowing each other for literally two days.
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I haven't yet finished reading every chapters but I have to say though the Fangirling Mc is just ruining this for me and it's getting harder for me to continue reading cause my enthusiasm is slowly crumbling.BUT even though I don't like the MC's personality in the earlier chapters I'll continue to read hoping her Fangirling will tone down eventually.Anyways, here's my 5 stars
I believe it had potential but my real problem is there are so many skills that have no dominant connection other than the race. She can literally do everything which not only makes your job as an author difficult to make it seems like you mc isn't stupid, but makes reading it confusing even after you fused several skills in a chapter it still made it difficult and in honesty if the plan was to merge them all maybe doing it during system bestowal so you can just get it down with.
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I have mixed feelings about the character and the narrative structure. The protagonist often comes across as overly reliant on the system granted to her, which diminishes her independence and personal growth. Her lack of initiative in boosting her intelligence and delving deeper into sciences or other areas of knowledge is a bit disappointing. This over-reliance on the system doesn't allow her character to fully explore her potential or develop self-reliance, which could have added more depth to her journey. Moreover, there's a notable lack of clarity regarding the entity that bestowed her powers. Understanding the entity's motives and the broader implications of these powers would add a much-needed layer of intrigue and complexity to the story. The origins and goals of this entity remain a mystery, which can be intriguing but also a bit frustrating from a narrative perspective. I would suggest an interesting plot development where the system develops its own separate entity, potentially even being removed from the protagonist's body. This could open up avenues for exploring themes like the consequences of power and the moral dilemmas of using such abilities. It could also lead to a deeper understanding of the 'Reality Bender' concept, perhaps hinting at the entity's enjoyment in manipulating or even destroying realities. Such a development could be an excellent opportunity for foreshadowing and adding a rich layer of suspense and complexity to the story. anyways i still enjoy this story.
awesome story so far(chapter 17), i have very high hopes for this, keep up the good work author
How to say it, well i read it to chapter 122, so far it's a bit messy, she gain trust to fast , she dont really develop her ability. if i need to say the story is developping to fast, she marry to fast, go to another world to fast. from chapter 1 to 122 it's harry potter x marvel and marvel x stargate , there are not really a lot a things appart seeing her get women, 2/3 battle, getting atlantis and making proposal to her women and getting them pregnant. and her species/abilities is a bit messy. this story has a lot of potential, i quite like it, but how is it written is not my type. But i like it, but the fact that she can go to other universe as she like and the story is not developping in one universe but is a mix of different universe/story is a bit confusing. (sorry english is not my native language)
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Alex_Simmonds Great work, man. You are doing a great job. Here is a fanfic idea you can do directly after Reality Bender System, Marvel. Marvel: Rebirth Of Spiderman Synopsis: Jack Sampson is someone with obsessive level intelligence on the MCU and Marvel Comics. He is given another chance at life and is reborn into Peter Parker's body with all his memories after being bitten by the spider. He does not know that the previous owner of the body had bought two lottery scratcher tickets to win 60 billion dollars for himself and Aunt May. He becomes a villain and wants to create a powerful empire and, eventually, conquer all of New York City. He will also take technology and modify or create serums to help him and his women grow stronger. Harem: 1. Rose Thompson 2. Lea Thompson 3. Aunt May 4. Liz Allan 5. Betty Brandt 6. Felicia Hardy 7. Lydia Hardy 8. Gwen Stacy 9. Helen Stacy 10. Rosalie Octavius 11. Nina De Costa 12. Venessa Fisk 13. Sasha Kravinoff 14. Calypso 15. Silver Sable 16. Diamondback 17. Titania 18. Amora The Enchantress 19. Lady Bullseye 20. Emma Frost 21. Selene Gallio 22. Ophelia Sarkissian 23. Sapphire Styx 24. Leeann Foreman 25. Deathbird 26. Elizabeth Rawson 27. Veranke His Costume
the first few chapters felt like a copycat, but then things went in a unique direction. I liked everything. And I propose to slightly limit the future number of partners, it will be easier to write, because too many points of view are difficult to implement so as not to alienate readers, and also not to make it look like collecting Pokemon.
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I like how you write your story it's very interesting and funny to listen to
Shameless Author review! Anyway, this is my first time writing a fan-fiction and i hope you all enjoy it. I plan to have fantasy, sci-fi and other elements scattered throughout the story and plan to have romance in there as well (It will be a Yuri). Please feel free to leave comments, i love them, have a good day/night.