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Re:monster with Douluo system
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A young man suddenly wakes up in a cave without knowing why. As he is confused about what is going on a sound goes off in his head
[Welcome the Douluo system]
With that his new begins but not without one blairing problem. He is now a goblin!!!
Warning: The story will follow the events of re:monster fairly close. Also while my mc will give anyone free outside his clan a green hat It will not happen to him. Another thing he will not cuck any members of parabellum. Lastly do not own any characters from the orginal story.
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So, it's boring. The development of the story practically follows the original, adding the protagonist's annoying brother, the writing is weak, making me feel that the character is lifeless and just a Mob that must have appeared in the original just to die somewhere and give a power up in the protagonist for losing his brother. Moreover the author leave the couples from the original with no changes, the story is basically about the protagonist's generic brother, I wanted to keep reading because to be honest it's not the worst romance I've ever read, but my eyes won't stop rolling, so I just gave up.
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La verdad pensé que por tener ya muchos capitulos habría mejora , pero después de cansarme al leer el capítulo 8 , quise ver si había mejora , y el último capítulo es lo mismo que los demás , falta edición y espacio , y toda esa nota necesaria, podría darle otra oportunidad si el author se esforzará por mejorar su escritura, por qué según tengo entendido, casi o más de la mitad es lo mismo del original, y casi los últimos capítulos solo agrega más personajes . - en conclusión lo que mato mi ánimo es la letras todas juntas y un poco que solo se guíe del original sin hacer cambios .