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This a story about a trainer and his Pokemons to a wonderful journey filled with mystery, joy and so much more.
Can he and his pokemon take on the challenge up ahead of them? Or will they fail?
Disclaimer!
The cover is not by me neither is Pokemon nor some other thing too. The only thing I own is the story and some OC.
I might not be the best to write a good grammar story, so I hope that you guys will help me with it, including the story too.
Also, this is my first book in Webnovel so I hope it going to be good.
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Character wise, grammer wise is definitely not 5 stars. Updates, maybe. Dialouge feels so lacking in emotion, like its emotionless characters talking.
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It could be better if you don't make the protagonist op too quickly and rather write longer volumes and add multiple supporting characters. Follow some of the thing from original Pokemon series but make it a bit realistic. Don't take the same Pokemon as ash but take different useful and cool Pokemon. Add different Pokemon backstory and don't skip different training parts.
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The grammar is terrible and is in need of proofreading or perhaps you could hire an editor. Still, don't drop this book because of my review, you have a lot of fans. Keep up the work and good luck! I'm sorry but grammar mistakes really irritate me. It ruins not only the writing quality but also the plot because it would be hard to comprehend. Stability of Updates, this is an automatic five stars for me. I usually rate all novels five stars when it comes to this category. The plot is good but common. Most Pokemon fanfic plots are usually like this. Basically, the mc meets god type of fanfic. I've read a lot of fanfics with this type of beginning but still, your plot is good and interesting. I'm sorry but I have to drop this novel in chapter fourteen. There are too many errors and mistakes, it not only irks me but deters me from my read. All the best to the author and I hope this review will not leave you disappointed or angry. Do not drop the novel for your fans!
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There is no force power used in this fanfic lol maybe a tiny bit in the absolute beginning or him healing Pokรฉmon who fainted but thatโs it. Itโs name of this fanfic yet itโs not used. The MC is beyond extremely childish and moody at random times that just donโt make sense. Heโs able to beat legendaries like itโs nothing and captures them wayyyyy to early in his journey. Lastly his family that does nothing for him but ask the world from him and when he was going to get a โsisterโ who is actually a cousin since her parents died he started to throw a hissy fit. Donโt waste your time
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Terrible grammar, even if it's not your first language, proofreading is required. One dimensional characters and MC's character is too childish for my liking. It's just my personal opinion so don't stop the work. I am dropping it because the grammatical errors are irritating me and sentence formations sometimes are even worse. Sorry dude.
I will be there at this point I don't know if I can help in any way I can get a ride to the airport on the past few days and I have a few questions about the fun of it and I will be there at this point I don't know if I can help in any way
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Iโm liking how this story progresses although a bit cliche at the beginning becomes really interesting to read, can wait for more keep it up author ๐๐๐
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Havenโt read the story so I donโt know if this is worth anyoneโs time. Just want to say that the rating is rigged because some benjamin dude is spamming five star reviews. So Iโm going to go out on a limb and say the story is not worth my or anyone elseโs time. There are more than 8 of those 5 star reviews from this benjamin dude. Since the rating is already rigged Iโll just leave this at 1 star for now and change it later if I feel like the story is good enough for anything above a 1 star rating.
Never done a review with this acc before. So i've read till the battle with Erika. Do take note, i wrote this review to give my two cents of what i would like to see more of. Storywise: I'm a bit in a conflict with this, i like it but i don't. It's interest but the whole progress is going too fast and too smooth. There are hardly any battles and the few battles there are, finish too fast. It makes the story rather dull and boring. But again i like some of the ideas that are in there that keeps it interesting. Updates: No complaints Characters: Soul feels like a marty stu, capable of doing anything and everything. I haven't noticed any actual flaws in him which makes it difficult to make a connection. Do like how he can talk with his pokemons. But i can't help but wish to see him in some hardship. Maybe a pokemon of his hurt or a pokemon that doesn't get along with him that he catches. I simply want to see him go trough some difficult times and see him grow as a person. There are no major complaints about the other characters. World: There is no major fault in the surrounding scenes. Altho more wild pokemons would be nice. And if there would be more wild pokemons, to see or rather read what they are doing. Overall i would give it around a 3 if this was the work of someone who would earn money of it. For a free to read novel and a perhaps a more novice writer, id score it a 4.
I like the story how it is progressing waiting for more updates. Keep going the updates and story.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I love that this fan fic isn't like others where there is a multiverse or mc is immediately op I also love that you are not completely changing the world but rearranging it to suit the new mc
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A good story. But please don't let him go all solo. Having a traveling partner is good whether it is male or female. travelling gets boring if you don't have someone to talk to. Believe me. Pokรฉmon is fine and all but they don't actually talk. Your story is good I love it. Just write it.