RedGunner

For now,, it's a 4 star. Mainly by the fact on how similar it is to Pokemon: Medieval Era Writing quality is alright but needs a lot of improvement. There are mistakes here and there but it's readable. Mainly the commas and some grammatical errors in the sentence.... I hope you proof read or use Grammarly to make it better Story development is decent until now but Character design needs some improvement. In some places the talk between characters is quite plain but would imagine this is your first time writing so I will go easy on that. Update stability is a 5 star as they seem pretty fast. World background would have been 5 if not for how every thing almost resembles Medieval Era fanfic on this site. The red eyes, ability, potential, and even the concept..... I was slightly disappointed with this but will surely re-review it after 30 chapters. I want to see more development so that I can see the improvement in various departments.

Great concept. You should never miss a fanfiction such as this Writing is great albeit minor mistakes. Very minor which can almost be ignored. Story development is the best out of any fanfics on this site. Amazing concept, you just immerse into the plot the author writes around Pokemon. Character design is very 3 dimensional. No established character feels irrelevant and no conversation feels forced. Every character has a sense of purpose to move the plot rather than just staying there. Update stability is great with 7 chapters a week for now. The author uploads big enough chapters with around 2500 words so I guess it's more than enough. World background is what keeps you hooked. It has such a unique concept that you almost feel like you are reading an original book. No System, No Harem, No Canon characters, No Team Rocket or any groups but still hooks you with its pace and intriguing plot. I would dare say that it has the potential to be the best pokemon fanfic on any site. Just stick till 12 chapters and you will know why.