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A man reincarnated in Pokemon world with infinite possibilities. Follow his journey.
DISCLAIMER:
I do not own Pokemon.
I do not own the cover either.
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Tulis ulasanOne question only before i read further, is there pokephilia or any romance between pokemon and human?
Suggestion: when developing the events of the story, avoid abusing the armor of the plot, as it makes it artificial and uninteresting. The journey and character development is sometimes more important than the goal itself. As an example of Sneasel's capture, the act was similar to Chinese novels in which the MC inherits some cultivation technique from the "primordial demon god", a series of coincidences that led to its acquisition.
This story is about trans "women" working at a pokemon beauty salon. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .....
Work is fine so far, hence the 3/5 ratings. Hisoka seems an interesting protagonist, if a bit clichรฉ. The plot seems interesting enough that I'll continue to follow, but this story is a bit rough around the edges. Work could seriously use an editor. Author can't seem to decide if the work wants to be in past tense or present tense, which isn't confusing but is distracting. The paragraph spacing also leaves a lot to be desired; traditionally, during a conversation, paragraphs would be used to denote a change in the speaker, in order to help the audience better follow the conversation. Overall, this story is interesting and fine, but with an editor, it could become actively very good in a short period of time. I look forward to then.
Honestly, this story even had potential at the beginning but seriously after he found Ash's group, the MC seems almost like another person relating very easily to people in an almost forced way, taking rhydon for me was a bad choice and even things that happen afterwards somehow leaves a forming taste in my mouth.
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It was quite good in the beginning but content quality went on degrading as story progressed. Ending is weird and unsatisfactory (in my opinion).
This is better than other pokemon fics, I read not gonna lie at first when I saw that the cover is gardevior, I already expected some mess up chapter but it's not.
Story is good but it's just that the MC is a bit too lucky in his journeys. Well, perks of being a reincarnation with pokemon knowledge yeah. However, he hasn't suffered any notable defeats yet. While he's actually a strong and tactical trainer, it sounds too unrealistic to always win, considering that even champions have losing records.
A very funny pokemon story ............................................................................................................................
the mission mc is taking are MERCENARY mission not bounty hunter. bounty hunter in this setting should b the one that catch certain Pokemon to nd sell to people and not retrieving dead skin of Pokemon and coketibg herbs. a mercenary is the one that do nearly anything for money
An excellent fan fic with my favourite pokemon in the lead. So far it's one of the 5 fics that I actually enjoyed on this site. Though 3 of them stopped uploading recently... So I hope you won't drop this.
Whats the update schedule like? Once a week or? .........:.:.:.:..:.:..:.:.:..:.:.:.:.::..:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:. .:..:.:.:.:.
The ending got rushed, though I'd prefer it was a hiatus... oh well good story.
Membuka SPOILERThis story is one of the good ones from the Pokemon fandom. The character development is good, the plot is a lil slow, world building is pretty neat. Except some minor errors the story can be read easily without disturbing the immersion. Some of the things that kept bugging me: - Sinking of SS Anne wasn't Hisako's fault. So he should have been compensated. - While trying to become gym leader of Dark city, the undercover Nurse Joy hated him. Why? MC did the league work, he saved the town. So why the cold shoulder? - I didn't fully understand about league citizenship. What I mean is, since Hisako has become the gym leader shouldn't he be eligible by default? - MC openly sharing the process of Rhydon evolution with Blaine. Also while Feebas was evolving he was careless. Koga's relatives could have seen the secret and MC would have been trouble, because the evolution process was a secret. Even with these nitpicks I truly enjoyed reading this story. The path of gym leader alongside being a hunter is a first for me and you, author have done an amazing job so far. Keep up the good work Rating 4/5
Membuka SPOILERA great fanfic ! Continue like that ! It was a big surprise to come across this nugget (if there are spelling mistakes, it's because english is not my mother tongue) !
This is definitely one of the best Pokemon fanfics out there. The English spelling of the words needs a bit of work. The world of Pokemon written in this fic is much better than the one seen in-game; the worldbuilding sometimes doesn't make sense in the games, but this fic fixes some of them. I like the interactions between the trainer and his Pokemon; the training chapters are fun! I'm now caught up to Chapter 70. Here's hoping for more updates coming soon!
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Today we're making author lemonade The recipe is easy, there's no need to be afraid just Fill a cup with water, now we're well on our way to Make something as glorious as author lemonade The last thing that we need's a heart and soul So take your trusty knife and carve a decent-size hole in your chest Take what is needed and we'll go for the gold by Squeezing out the juice contained within the heart and soul
Penulis Skye12_
I come from having bad experiences with, pokemon blood ties, and pokemon alex burns, as well as others, so please.... please don't disappoint me, do you know how difficult it is to find a good pokemon fic???