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Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
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World: High School of the Dead - Kimetsu no Yaiba - Danmachi - Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei - Chivalry of a Failed Knight - My Hero Academia -
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When he was reincarnated, he knew that his future would be great.
Becoming a tech billionaire, having a chic life surrounded by many beautiful girls, and happy days forever!
Yet, all of that future was going to disappear when he realized that zombies were going to ravage the world.
In such a future, all of his wealth and savings would become nothing!
When he was helpless about what to do, he saw a dying black cat and dog on the street, surrounded by many flies. Everyone ignored those dying animals and just continued with their lives. He also planned to do so, but when he thought about his future, he decided to do a good deed for the last time.
Yet, when he was about to bury those two dying animals, he saw the fly that landed on his hand disappear.
[You have acquired the DNA of fly.]
[Do you want to absorb it?]
"........................"
At that moment, he realized his future would be more amazing than he had thought.
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By the way, the photo profile is the mother of Tanjiro Kamado from Kimetsu no Yaiba.
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Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more.
Honest review. I mean, it's a akikan novel, and he never tried to change his style of writing. MC is actually not a villain this time but just "trying" to be the good guy. Again, sometimes the logic MC uses doesn't make sense, just like any other akikan novel. And I don't doubt that his whole personality will change through out the whole novel several times. At Least this novel isn't as slow paced as the other ones. I do like that he is experiencing with his system and the DNA stuff, that makes it interesting, even more interesting than the other systems. Very bad writing(as per usual if akikan), As it is written like it for 10 year olds. Can't really say much as it's only in it's early chapters. But I hope he doesn't ruin the story like he usually does in his other novels or uses no logic for the characters. It's a entertaining novel to read but also a bad one. [4/30/2024]
A new Akikan's fanfic i hope this is good like others. He has the ability to obtain the dna of animals to strengthen himself and can also transform into that animal as he wish. This ability have a good potential, imagine being able to obtain the dna of other races or dna of mythical and magical creatures. Also imagine if he can get a dna of eldritch creatures
Akikan's I just hope this fanfic will have long chapters and I hope the overall quality of the story in the future remains good, as usual. And congratulations on your new fanfic.๐๐๐๐๐
it feels like all his characters are the same person just with different names, I feel sorry for those whom he adds to his fanfiction, he completely kills their character, brain and uniqueness
Very annoying reading experience thanks to the childishly petty mc, the girls instantly falling in love with him just by meeting him and the overall disrespect shown by the mc, oh and the novel needs some proof-reading. The dna system is broken but it's also really interesting.
The writing is pretty good but all your main characters act like someone that has gotten a lobotomy.
the author's big flaw is the inconsistency with the protagonist's powers, which never seem to evolve or are not explained, a being that absorbed so much DNA was supposed to have enormous potential, any comic book villain that absorbed so much dnd from different species was continental level. the story was cool but the plot basically keeps going around and around, the MC goes to some world and makes a harem, absorbs some of people's DNA and just.
Mc seems to be going down the path of a cuck not sure if he will in consideration of the authors other novels but the fact that the Mc told freya to marry bell after they had s*x and she proposed to mc made me disgusted other then that novel was alright
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5B without a doubt rag, why? Since this is Akikan Bruh, there's no need to question the fanfic. But what I regret is the lack of 18+ scenes in each fanfic
The main problem of this story lies in its protagonist, the charisma is replaced by secondary characters who applaud and venerate him even if it is the first time they see him, the system only gives him three powers, absorb and copy every living being, mentally control every living being absorbed and travel between worlds, these powers will be forgotten since the plot suits him, the relationships are nonexistent the protagonist only sees even women as objects, his character is a hypocrite of the type who justifies himself and sees himself as a victim. His goal is to be a superior being for what? Well, he has nothing else to do, he is the most powerful being in the world and has 0 connection with other people.
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I've waited for this guy's new fanfic to be released for months now. And thank the heavens he made a new one.
Pretty much a crack fic. Leave logic at the door if you want to enjoy the story, and remember; the MC is a Good Guy. Except for all the times they aren't, but it's justifiable because morality is decided by the mc and everyone agrees. Also
Another great story from akikan, let's just hope this will also be better and not like riser one ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Akikan's new work ๐ I hope this time it will be even more exciting, because MC will travel to many worlds. For now I will give this much first.
Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more. He tries to be a good character in an Apocalypse world by taking care of Bad guys when he should kill them. The main character of the shoes become dump and try to hurt mc but MC tries to save them since he wants to be a 'good' person. Its like those Iseki Japanese mc who are beta in every way but get girls because of plots otherwise they should have been dead. There are many plot hole and such like mc could threaten Politicians like those in higher ranks but did those politicians never think of killing him plus he says he is rich then if he knows that apocalypse is coming shouldn't he buy food using all his money cuz money is useless in an apocalyptic world. Don't waste ur time
Not my type of reading, the MC is evil and a sociopath or something like that I'm on chapter 2 so it may change but from my point of view I doubt it. Thanks for the effort author.
After the DxD story, this is the lowest it has fallen, the protagonist's personality is no longer charismatic, it is insufferable, the interactions only focus on whether she is a woman, the protagonist drools if he is a man , kisses the protagonist's feet, there is no longer any coercion or anything. It is surprising to see how this author remained silent about this.