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Overlord: The Origin
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MC died, meet a god, agreed to be isekai'd in isekai to be isekai'd later on isekai where magic is real.
Makes sense right?
Now read it.
Also, if you haven't noticed yet, this is an isekai story.
And also, this Fanfic is a fulfilment story type. I will be focusing on some plot, but you already know what we all want. This a godforsaken fanfic goddammit. If you want plot, just watch the anime instead!
Note: The update of the chapters will be really inconsistent. Sometimes, i will update regularly, sometimes don't, so don't expect much.
*English is not my main forte so try not to be salty as your underwear.*
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You have written a excelent sotry , cant wait for more A few other overlord stories have done things sLightly similar to your own but one thing which i havent find i think is using the lore of the story to your advantage Why dont you write your characters lore and make yourself OP or give yourself more advantages when the story Starts
I start this novel not expecting much but look where it got me... Now I can’t even bare to wait for the slow update. It get very addictive. Author story telling skills are good.
It is an extremely nice fan fiction, worth your time believe me, and you have nothing better to do so give it a shot, okay ? Oh, don’t listen to those negative reviews, these degenerates are the main reason for the invention of condoms and birth control pills, So please, Protect yourself, and don’t make anymore of those arseholls !
I see Overlord, I bookmark. I see and R-18 Overlord, I bookmark. I see Albedo, I bookmark. But why the hell I even bookmark beside the gorgeous thot succubus cover? That awesome summary that is!
This site needs more overlord fanfic. Such a good light novel, yet nobody ever expands on it. My only complaint is the small chapters, but at least the updates aren't slow.
It was an incredible book. At least the wind up was. The sorry leading up to the New World was great. Then as soon as the game shut off at around chapter 60, the book sharply decrease in quality. there were lots of story arcs and plots that never finished. The author also has huge time skips without explaining much, giving the character way too much power or way to little power to make sense for how long it was. Overall, it was a good read until the new world. It was built up on a solid foundation then the structure itself was built with sand rather than steel.
This story starts out very strong, with the MC amassing a lot of power in the game world prior to the shutdown in ways that mostly make sense. My problem is that once the shutdown hit, the MC suddenly becomes a lot weaker than he reasonably should be, based on his accomplishments up to that point, and he's completely separated from the rest of Nazarrick. Not saying you can't make an interesting story around that premise, but to me it felt like a slap in the face and had a sort of "all your trials are meaningless" implication.
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Well, the novel started before YGGDRASIL come out and the pace might be a bit slow for some but personally I like it, it give out detail about his abilities as well as his interaction with the other player before he go to the new world. Currently it's still at the point where's MC still play the game together with Ainz Ooal Gown member. About the wish, he got 5, the first wish is that he has everything necessary to allow him to live comfortably before going to the new world, the rest is still unknown. There are review saying it's a waste wish and he should use it to wish for some power and got reincarnate directly to the new world, I think that's stupid and short sighted, the wish itself give no direct power but it's tremendously useful, YGGDRASIL is a pay 2 win game, without worry about money he can be a whale and pump as much cash as he want into the game without the need to worry about his livelihood and in return creating an OP character, he would be overpower himself, has overpower NPC, item when he go to the new world, wishing for that directly would probably took up a few wish. Reincarnate directly to the new world and wish for some power? what do you wish for? Sharingan or Saiyan blood line? If it's that I drop instantly. All in all I like the fic. Thank author san.
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I like novel but the Title tilts me to no end... why add the 's' at the end of overlord unless you want to not take Ainz spot but rule beside him or for him..
the chapter title reaaaaallly threw me off!!! i started searching for ch 1 but got ch85 so i thought it was a mismatch so i didnt read at first. but i got bored and tried to read it by searching for ch 1 but found prologue which left me in the middle of nowhere. then i reach from ch85 which was the real ch 1 and my face at that moment was this😒 like bruh!! why the hell would anyone do that???!! then as i continued reading i realized that the author was a complete jackass. the story was nice though i loved it and want more but seriously stop trolling the readers. Also what happened to the initial 5 wishes?? is it gonna be revealed later or did he jus ask for money?? why didnt he just ask for unlimited money then he would have no problem. It is nice that his abilities fit the world but asking for those wishes only served as a nerfing.the chapters are too short and i hope you can update faster :)
Alrighty this is my first time writing a review so please take as a grain of salt. Pros - absolutely amazing writing - obviously handsome author - non cringey comedy - smart mc? - can easily hook you into the story - Incredible chapter names Grey area - Author is a tad bit narcissistic - Ruthless cliffhangers - filler chapters Cons - the authors horrible trick chapters! - inconsistent chapter updates This is my current review please tell me if there is anything I missed. also I hope anyone who is reading this has a excellent day!
So far it's a perty good story I guess. It's going a little too slow for my liking or maybe I'm just being impatient. And his wishes are ASS and be prepared the author is a troll like max level troll
I feel like the authors a troll but also not ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ good story btw keep up the good work <3... or not, your just going to do whatever you want probably.
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This is very excellent if you want to know why read my previous review but this review is too give you some inspiration and ideas author ------------------- Hey author maybe when the overlord is finished you can go to SAO and fix things ( you know what im talking about) and be OP, you can make your character a troll because hes the only intelligent monster and maybe pretend your the last boss MAYBE YOU CAN EVEN CREATE A NEW DUNGEON, when you finish SAO you can go to other VRMMO anime or Manga --- ( why do i feel like i shouldnt give you this idea and just create it myself.....JK, im to lazy to do all that besides im a reader
It's not the best story Il admit that. But boy is it So Stupid I love it. This story feels more like a unique take on the story in my opinion. The story is still a bit rough around the edges, but overall its pretty good.
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