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One Piece: The Next Marine Hero
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(Disclaimer: I don't own any aspect of One Piece)
Finn, was a captured choreboy forced to work for the Alvida Pirates. He trained each day to get strong enough to join the Marines.
One day, a man in a straw-hat defeats the Alvida Pirates, letting him follow his dreams along with Koby.
What happens as he navigates through life as a Marine, fighting powerful Pirates, and facing the threats of the One Piece World!
No cheats / system or anything of the sorts.
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3Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasan
Increíble por fin un fanfic sobre un marine recto y de sangre férrea ,sin ser solo un asesino sin sentido que va matando de derecha a izquierda,gran obra señor autor ,por favor siga con el buen trabajo
Writing: people can actually read this, so 5/5 Updating stability: most likely dropped, so 3/5 Story development: nothing really happens, huge time skips and fast pace. The story is basically the grind and that's about it 3/5 Character design: Main character is some random hobo that is on Alvida's ship as a chore boy. Nobody knows who he is exactly, I bet author himself doesn't know, so 2/5 World background: The world is not really explored at all. If the arc affects the storyline a little bit, that's not good enough for the author, so he most definitely skips that arc altogether 2/5
Hey guys! Just want to say I am thankful for you all for reading it whether you liked it or not, I'm glad you put the time to read a story I made. I'm sorry if you get mad at me for making the score for my story a 4.6, I apologize!!