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One Piece : Earning One Trillion Berries Before Retiring
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Kahn travelled into the world of one piece even before Roger started his adventure.
He who has had a long and adventurous life as a vice admiral on world of one piece and is now contemplating retirement.
He finally activated his Golden Finger, a super money system that offers him the opportunity to restore his peak condition and potentially achieve eternal life. However, the cost of these benefits is quite high, and he realizes he needs to accumulate a significant amount of money to achieve his goals.
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The writing style of this fanfic is horrible, one of the worst I've read in a webnovel, it uses (brackets) to express the emotions of the characters, there is no basic flow in the plot and dialogues, it seems that the MC is talking to an NPC from a game with bad dialogues. Really is a pain for the eyes read this fanfic
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Lots of use of emotions, every single dialogue has emotions written in bracket, like Nami(angry) : dialogue Kahn(intrigued) : dialogue So on and so forth... Never seen a narrative like that and dont like it one bit... It breaks immersion and is just straight up annoying ngl. Not to mention the pace and story is all over the place, one time, the MC is talking about old days, his dissapointment, his justice and then the very next second he does stuff or monologues about how to profit off of his justice Anyway dropping the fanfic
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You might as well make the cover king Christ, his robin cosplay is way better, this cover look like shemail.
I'm giving this three stars, because I simply couldn't read more than six chapters. There are just too many mistakes and I don't mean spelling or grammar. Nami's personality is just gone and replaced to be a tool for demonstrating the Mc's "awesomeness". Stuff like that makes the story seem suspiciously chinese. So if you care about accuracy, when it comes to depicting the world of One Piece and its characters this isn't for you. Maybe it gets better, but it's too hard for me to read.
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it's a good fanfic for entertainment 😄 , highly recommended 👌