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Naruto: The Mist Within
4.62 (17 peringkat)
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When a Medical student awakens in an infant's body in the deadly Hidden Mist Village, he knows surviving will require more than just his memories of a past life. In a world where children are forced to kill each other and bloodline abilities mark their wielders for death, Ren must carefully balance hiding his true potential while gathering enough strength to change the village's dark future. As Kirigakure descends into an era of unprecedented brutality, this reincarnated soul will discover that the deadliest technique isn't found in forbidden scrolls - it's knowing exactly when to reveal your true power.
Fair Warning:
This is a slow-burn story - no overpowered MC from the start
Power progression is realistic and earned through years of dedicated training
Contains graphic violence and death
Story builds gradually with careful character and plot development
What to Expect:
Detailed training arcs and power progression
Clever manipulation of future events using foreknowledge
Original story arcs and character development
[This novel is for readers who enjoy:
Smart protagonists who rely on wit over raw power
Realistic skill progression and strategic combat
Deep world-building and political intrigue
A fresh perspective on the Naruto universe]
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An incredible Naruto fanfic set in Kirigakure! The slow-burn character development and immersive world-building are masterfully done. A must-read without a doubt.
I like your story author. However, since his father's death you are showing how Ren is creating boundaries and "using" his friends, watching everything with indifference. I understand that after a close person's death people needs time to heal and all. But the idea of not having bonds because they are weakness and using everyone, always seeing things with indifference is soon going to be the same as literally 99% other fanfics where authors think that is somehow the best option. Without bonds soon the character will feel mechanical and like no emotional intelligence. It also wouldn't create hooks, tension while particularly tricky situations unfold. Forgive me if i seemed like ranting, but a lot of authors make their character cold, indifferent, dark, etc etc. and not always it makes sense. Especially here he felt love with his parents, had friends. Instead of weakness it could be shown as powerful motivation to not loose them and improve more. The other characters could also have significant growth, and together with Ren, could dunno have more impact than just some one man show. Just my opinion that can make the story more engaging and real. Nobody will become Madara level powerful by the time they are in early teens. You said so that realistic growth will be there. Rivalry, and helping each other grow is sorta more feasible than one dude becoming a mechanical machine and training non stop and using everyone to bis advantage for years until he feels ready to face the world, which can take decade and still me me tally sane. I jst wanted to convey my thoughts, as i wouldn't have bothered writing so much if i hadn't been hooked. The chapters of bonding and the subsequent couple chapter where Toshiro died and the funeral and all, how he said his mother doesn't need to be strong all the time, how his mother and father met, all these were really nice, i actually felt the emotions. In anycase, good luck with your story.
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W fucking fic, i like the pacing and th character development, even though yu somtimes get the grammer wrong, its only basic, it doesent affect the reading experience alot.
I just don’t like how he can heal himself because he was studying nursing for 1 year in college so now he can learn medicine jutusu in 2s and he can regrow back his legs and arms now I’m exaggerating a bit but u can get the idea he uses his knowledge and corporate it in his jutusu like no one thought off before like come on it’s just stupid for example how I know pi=3.14 so know I can use that in my jutusu it make a planet and go to space like Superman… i’m just saying how stupid it is and how OP hes going to be because of that dumbshit with knowledge of his past life can he just be normal and being op is fine but balance it make things simpler by not adding the aliens shit in the future no Boruto so he doesn’t need to be super op to fight them off and upgrade chunin and jonin and make it so everyone is important and not canon fire
Membuka SPOILER I would of gave this a 5 star but there are some problems like for example the misgendering of characters he/her also him/his when you mentioning a girl and characters description, like when you introduced a character it would be nice to describe how they look example hair color and so on and the mentioning of jutsu like“henge no jutsu” add a little description next to it (transformation jutsu) and for the same thing for the villages konohagure add (hidden leaf) that would be nice if you can fix these issues I read up to 24 chapters so idk if you fixed these issues in the later chapters but it should be nice to fix these issues in the older chapters too
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love the story so far a little slow, but that is OK only problem is the jetsu names in Japanese. make them in English so I know witch jetsu is it
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please like this if it reached 100 chapters, so I'll start reading it, but in the first chapter, I can see it's potential
This is a good fic in the hidden mist. The Mc is a few years younger than Kakashi. Smart Mc who's not edgy and cares about people. Give it a try
The writing quality isn't anything to write home about there are a couple areas on misgendering going in between him and she on the same character multiple times but I can get past that and I know this is supposed to be a slow burner but how the hell is the MC still in the academy after 100 chapters like that's just ridiculous another problem I generally have no problem with fanfiction that are slow burners as long as the fic has a couple hundred chapters but the main reason why I generally don't stick around that long is because half the time the author's dropped the fanfiction before it ever gets good and I generally speaking I hate it whenever the MC always tries to lay low to not show off because 90% of fanfiction mc have no reason to do so but in this one I will let it slide because he's in the hidden mist
Well written but has 1 major demerit. 122 chapters in and he's still in the academy...... C'mon. at this rate its looking like i'm closer to retirement than he is to shippuden