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NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE

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Penulis: Writer77

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Story of a super naruto fan named Tan Hishaki who is reincarnated into naruto world . This story shows how he uses his knowledge to become a great sage in this world.

Warning: I do not own this franchise. All characters belong to the respective owner.

Readers must have knowledge of naruto , naruto shippuden .
The cover image does not belong to me

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  1. samuel_A
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  2. perverted_kitsune
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  3. Senre
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Extant
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I like this, but the quick switching of the other characters is unnecessary and more disruptive. It would be better to do a third person perspective for all the other characters when a chapter is dedicated to a specific character. There also needs to be more details on what the other characters are doing. Such as: "Asuma bit down on his cigarette in shock as his eyes roamed over the crater for a few moments, taking in the destruction, before shifting his gaze to the boy lying in the center of the crater that caused this destruction. He had only a single thought in his head as he gazed down at the boy, (What kind of monster is this kid!?)" My example is not the best, but it gives you a small number of details that you can improve on.

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Bloody_Sage

Was going to give it all 5 stars but dropping it after making a really good story ruins everything no point you might as well just give up writing because disappointing your fans is the same as cutting your own foot off I hope everyone understands that and never read your books again. Your quality of writing was amazing the background of the sorry great the stability of your update suck cause you dropped it a character design was great and you decide to drop your story you know what you're not worth my time you're not a serious person you disappointed everybody by dropping this novel you don't deserve our loyalty or support for any of your work anymore. If you had finished the story and then didn't continue it into borruto None of us would give you any problems.

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tomaz
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Good job. ..................................................... ..................................................... .....................................................

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kobeblackmamba

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aiyra84

this novel keeps on getting better and better and even the character development is very good .. overall very nice rest is filler bdfuzbczfbbudf

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Atlas_Evergreen

The author doesn't know what hes talking about, There are a lot of grammar mistakes and plot holes. Ninja Academy starts when you are 8 not 5 years old. You cant just buy jutsus from the library. The MC says that he sneaked up on the the Uchiha clan leader who is a elite jonin at least probably kage level.

4yr
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hiiamme123

I only read a bit of the first chapter and skimmed the rest but OMFG is this absolute shit. In the past I have read atleast 150 chapters of that Google translated shit that even if you read a sentence 6 times you still can’t find out what it was trying to say. And this has less common sence then that. I can’t believe it. A car has no breaks in the mc’s world. If you are helping an old man cross the road you are behind him pushing with 2 meter sticks. If a God-like being answeres a question ‘too fast’ he is angry. Atleast get the MC’s death right. There are countless other people who have and you failed at that simple task. He was walking on the sidewalk. A black cat walked infront of him, he thought nothing of it then. crows cawed up in the sky running from something then boom something hit him from behind and he saw black. Like this makes sence (hopefully) and it was pulled out my ass in less then 5 minutes. I know it is bad but it works. It could get better in future chapters but i don’t think so.

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okaceta1

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frangky
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I think this fan fiction have a potential, and please don't drop it. Also I think he should slowly combine the chakra and control it to the maximum so he can control and do it more efficient

5yr
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CoffeeImmortal

Like like like. dengan alurnya saya memang sangat tertarik. .......................... dengan tata bahasa yang tepat dan teratur. .... ...m..

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vanguard1s

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XENO
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One word to describe this novel will be AWESOME!!.....even though the novel is a bit slow pace it’s enjoyable and the slow pace can be completely ignored with a little bit of patience but to find out why I’m rating it so high you gonna have to read this jolly novel😊

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SINGH_TEJASVIN

Very good novel i dont understand why some people rated it with 1 star but anyways very nice 👍😎👌👌👌👌👍👍👍✌✌✌😎😎😎 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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tsd90
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Very nice novel better that other it is very stable is I am loving it its getting better and better and better awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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tsd90
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Very nice novel better that other it is very stable is I am loving it its getting better and better and better awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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EmbarrassedEdge

So Far so good.......................................................................................................................................................................................⊂_ヽ   \\    \( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)     > ⌒ヽ    /   へ\    /  / \\    レ ノ   ヽ_つ   / /   / /|  ( (ヽ  | |、\  | 丿 \ ⌒)  | |  ) / ノ )  Lノ (_/

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MohamedRost

The novel is good, i keep checking every day for a new chapter !!! Can't wait till the real action starts !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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SusanoKilla

The novel is good, i keep checking every day for a new chapter !!! Can't wait till the real action starts !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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