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Naruto: A Life On The Battlefield
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A boy was supposed to die, a normal clan child with dreams of the future. Of course, in the Shinobi world, any life could be snuffed out in an instant. He was Tometsu Uchiha, and he was fated to die in the latter years of the Second Shinobi War. But what would've happened if a floating 'scroll' appeared upon him on his deathbed? With a promise of survival if the boy would complete a simple mission. It was really too bad it was treason.
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Pure garbage. Mistakes every chapter, power scaling is wack. The 1000th system based naruto fanfic. No harem? Seriously, do you even know the audience you're writing for?
the fight scenes are superb, and author is showing some glaring holes in the original naruto with braindead hiruzen.... or is he ?? to know truth we need to wait for more chapters
The clan above everything! The clan above everyone! The blood of traitors and enemies will flow freely, and the honor of the Uchihas will remain unsullied for thousands of years to come. Death to Hiruzen Sarutobi
Honestly the novel is pretty good and and an enjoyable read, the power progression makes sense and the MC is an oc which is honestly a breath of fresh air in the sea of SI novels. The writing is also really good and the character dialogue is really believable, the author did a great job portraying the MC and his motivations.
Incorrect names, ages, etc. If you can look past the wildly incorrect timeline and such its an okay read
This is suprisly good, the characters and everyone seem to have actual personality and world buidling is also great.
Uno de los mejores fanfics que he leído un MC que de Uchiha que de verdad pone a su clan por encima de la aldea sin importarle las consecuencias tiene el potencial de ser el líder de clan más poderoso de la historia de los uchihas y ser el más temido puede llevar a el clan una gloria sin igual me gusta lo técnico que es el autor con los jutsus y sus aplicaciones y posibles modificaciones también me encantaría hacer recomendaciones que harían a el MC destacar por encima de los demás crear jutsus basados en cuervos que use el clon explosivo como lo hizo itachi usar la sustitución de plumas de cuervos como en sekiro y que por una vez en un fanfic llevar el genjutsu a alturas nunca antes vistas también te puedo sugerir un apodo si te interesa
Pretty good read, the story follows Uchiha Mikoto's older brother as he navigates through the second ninja war, he gets a pretty basic system from some random deity but the catch is he has to kill the 3rd Hokage.
an absolute masterpiece. keep up the good work author. i got instantly hooked reading this.
I just read the entire story in a single session. Amazing writing, very detailed lore. There is some inconsistency with the ages of characters like Sakumo, but overall the flow and pacing is amazing and is not full of stats and power trip planning usually found in most fics.
Thank you for such a wonderful story.............................................................................................................................................................................................
this is a great fanfiction. we can only hope that the author keep it up. Outstanding [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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So MC have 3 tomoe sharingan+ sage mode even though he don't have jonin level chakra and his sharingan can be countered by freaking googles 🤣 Fooking Ret@rd 🤣🤣