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Mcu inhumain : Izel l'eternal (english)
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A young Mayan who hunted in the forest found himself trapped in an extremely strange installation for him who had never seen a metal wall or indeed a blue human. These people have done something to him that has profoundly changed who he is, now different from the person who was his people how can he advance in his adventure you will see that in this story. A story of discovery, meeting and learning towards the end of the path of his life.
This story will be in the MCU timeline with a mix of the comics, any character other than my character is not mine;)
This is my fiction but written in English, by google translation so if there are any errors I am sorry.
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Power 
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stone Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
6Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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My english is so bad , i'm french sorry my mom living in burgundi at not my choice lol ;) Vote for me ! :) Not google trad for writing the text
Continue comme sa mec tu rend fierté AU FR AHHHHH 🇨🇵🇨🇵🇨🇵🇨🇵🇨🇵Jsuis moitier belge donc ALLER LES BELGE AUSSI 🇧🇪🇧🇪🇧🇪🇧🇪🇧🇪🇧🇪
This novel is amazing. The only problem is the English associated with it. If this had an editor, I have no doubt it would be in the top 30. The English make it confusing to read sometimes, but with enough dedication. Everything is possible.
This is lookin really good. Cant wait for more.This is lookin really good. Cant wait for more. This is lookin really good. Cant wait for more. Please continue writing more chapters.
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the grammar is not good but readable. you can try using free grammar.ly or google translate but do it sentence by sentence to make it better. even though you want to make original, try a little more reference so reader can relate