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Life in Shinobi World (Naruto Fan-Fic)
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Reincarnated In Naruto World as Neji's Younger brother with ope ope no mi and Ashura's Chakra.
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If you have an issue with my writing skills then I can only say sorry because I don't have enough time to do a recheck but if I find any mistake or someone notifies me about it then I will correct it.
But if your eyes hurt and you find it not of your liking or whatever then please do me a favour and stop reading this, no one is forcing you to read this book.
Please do note this book is not only for you but also for me to pass my free time. I just want to create a good FF for myself. I am not a professional writer just passing time and it is also my first time.
Any suggestions are welcomed as long as you don't curse at me.
[ The above part about my views is kind of copy-paste from another author because it matches quite a lot with my views and I wasn't able to find proper words about it.]
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DISCLAIMER:
[English isn't my first language]
[I don't own Naruto and One piece as they are created by Kishimoto and oda respectively]
[This is my first Fanfiction so it may contain several mistakes so feel free to notify me I will correct them accordingly]
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Just giving my personal review You can find fics a lot better than this out there but it is readable so you can give it a try. Grammar is ok not too good not too bad. Writing quality is decent, as English is not my first language, sometimes if something is in my mind and I want to write it down but I am unable to express it while writing. The story's start is a bit different but you also can find some similarities with others of Naruto on this platform in the later part. And yeah I did too much drama in the start but I did not want to it this much. So yeah some may hate it. Well, some may hate my complete novel which I also find not up to the mark when I compare to others. But I am improving, maybe later I can write it better so that it will be more enjoyable to read. As it's my story so I can't find too many flaws but I can say that some people may like it so you can give it a try. And if you find any holes and flaws then notify I will try my best to correct them. And yeah I will give it five stars even though writing some flaws. It's my fic
Too much unecesary drama and the authors hate o the hyuga is the same with fans that hate danzo ,............................,........,............................,........
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The Story has too much drama. Lessen the dramas. Keep up the good work. Please don't drop this fanfic.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
Quite enjoyable to read. However, the MC seems smart but horribly naรฏve at the same time, and by that I mean he trust way too easily especially knowing the dangers of the Naruto world. All around, just a fun story to read.
Well your novel is good so I am giving yo 5 stars But I think you should improve your english I know its not your 1st language but at least you should try There is too much drama , I know its important for character to grow but in starting chapters its too much. you should try to do it a little less All in all I like your novel and keep up the good work
Suffers from the same 'reborn in naruto illness' as most of the naruto fanfic out there, the mc is a little kid for most of the fanfic and it will never get past the chuunin exam, as usual. Not wowrth reading, You have read one, you read them all. It suffers from all th tropes from 'toddlers of war' to 'genius 2 years old' and all the likes. I blame part of it on kishimoto and his love of child soldiers, the gaiden arc truly did attract the wrong people to the fandom...
I would recommend this as a fic, Ive read many others and nothing can compare, The writting Quality is something that eveRy book should strive for.
good idea for naruto fanfic or should i say hyuuga fanfic? interesting! although ssome slight mispellings and punctuations could be corrected by using grammarly *not advertising ok*, It doesnt cause readers to be distracted. Overall good, i hope author can create original hyuuga justu. thank you!
5 star for no harem 5 star for no harem 5 no star for no harem 5 star for no harem 5 star for no harem 5 star for no harem 5 star for no harem 5 Star for no harem 5 star for no harem
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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The book is good and has potential . Keep on writing .It will be an amazing book after that ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐ฏ๐ฅณ๐ฏ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐ค๐๐ญ๐คฉ๐ค๐๐๐ญ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐ฐ๐๐๐ค๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐ฐโค๐ฅณ๐๐๐๐ฐ
Nice, orororororororiririrororororororiroririroroririroriririroririririroriroririririririiriririririririririrororroorororororororororororotototototototototititititoitititiritititiroriititititiritititititititititititititjtitjjfhfhdhdhdhshshsuwuwiieeieiwieieieieieieieieieiieieieieieieieieieieieieidieidjfjcjjccjjcuvjcjvhcvjvjvjjvjvjvjvucjcjcjfjjfjfjcjfjjfufudueiieieieieieidieidididididididididieidiei
Need more chapters faster i wanna know what comes next. This is a really interesting story to read. Definitely puts a spin with the Hyugaโs.
This is a great fanfic.The character is an OC and also brother of Neji. The background is also not at all bad. And the writing quality of this story undoubtedly topnotch. The story has great potential and waiting for more. Thank you for writing such a great story.
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You had my support when I saw no harem. This story us amazing. Took literally a whole hour to fund no harem naruto FF.........................
being one of the shameless authors ,. giving 5 star to my fanfic as its my first fanfic kindly point out the mistakes thank you for reading