Lei Jin (Martial Peak)

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shaluxifa

Will any of the girls from the original story be part of the mc harem im thinking about 50 wifes and 100 the limit

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trueidiocy_577

So basically an OC? With original progression based on Ink Clan, etc?

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PlayValak

Are you sure this is fanfiction? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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shaluxifa

will there be r-18

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Dilash_Mainali

the story and world bulding is good and the effort put by the author is good too but the life of mc feels like a puppet who couldnt control his own life and is being controlled by the sects elder i hope author and improve this feeling

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Santy_Melay

Look, I couldn't really tell you how good the novel is because I didn't read much, but the dialogues make me put it down, they feel surreal and super flat, plus the conversations are missing information, like: Lei Jin felt a presence in that place. That kind of things.

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Discarded

you read fanfic becauss you want to see your favorite canon characters in action or self insert yourself into the story loved by your favorite characters? jokes on you, thia fic is all about OC characters interacting and in relationship with OC characters while all your favorite characters of this fandom and girls is sidelined into mere supporting or figuran. enjoy

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Young_fruit_Smiley

Is MC reincarnated, transmigrated or oc? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________