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Land Of The Unknown
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Dropped into this mash up of the MCU as a mutant with strange powers and a system. The MC Jack must become strong to protect himself from the dangers in the MCU, and maybe even thrive in it.
I do not own the MCU or the cover if the person who owns this wants me to take it down then tell me
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waste of time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are just Checking off all the boxes of other successful fanfics (which isn’t necessarily a bad thing usually) in a extremely quick way. so far none of the characters have personality and the dialogue is terribly robotic. The chapters are also WAY too short (like a paragraph in length for some of them)
Hey im actually excited too see what you do with this so i hope you dont drop it but im curious i feel like this is a little light hearted for someone who has the abilities of spawn or is that only me and i like how you are making him choose sides early on but I also hope that you dont mess with too much of what we know will hapen in marvel like preventing some people from getting powers but creating new ones would be interesting to see. over all im looking forward to what you do with