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Kenzai
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A story that takes place in a mysterious world full of magic and mythical beasts. Join Ken Ai on his adventure in exploring the entirety of the world and making many allies and enemies along the way.
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The story is great, the characters, the vast world and story development is very well thought and is implemented into the chapters very well. The one con though is the punctuation and occasionally, the grammar. Sometimes it's hard to tell if Ken's thinking or having a flashback. Overall, the story is great and entertaining, and it always makes me want to read on more at the end of every chapter. It's just the small errors in writing that needs improving. Other than that, I want to find out what Ken does next and I'm looking forward to what ManjD has in store for Kenzai!
This is really a good series, I cannot wait to see what does the future this series will have to the readers. There are some mistakes in the series but those can be easily solved like writing Chapter at the title or the action is kinda fast. And you should be careful to write 1000 words in a chapter, otherwise this one will become a short story instead of a novel
I love how the story is so intense and full of action! I think the main thing that could be improved is the punctuation, as well as maybe making it clear whether Ken’s thinking to himself or speaking out loud, or what tone of voice someone’s using. I’m excited to see what Ken does next!
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the world seems vast and full of good materials, the characters seem well designed, I'd like a describe of the looks of the characters though, the mother seemed awfully willing to send her son into the unknown world? but overall i think the story has a good start, looking forward for the rest of your work bud!