In A Cultivation World With An Entertainment Park -(Moved to new link)

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klymcp

Interesting. I shall try it out. Big fan of King of Technology here 💪 [img=fp][img=faceslap][img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update]

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YoungMasterMeng

a Big Fan of King of Technology here 🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏳🏴🏳🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏳🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏳🏴🏴🏳🏴🏴🏴🏴🏳🏴🏳

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daedpool18888

absolutely hilarious, fun to watch ming rong or chu che to go about, just started reading it and im already in love with this novel. the town people are so damn funny man, there reactions to that of chu che makes situation even more funny. this is your second novel lummydeee and i have loved both of them, but because i like comedy more than the serious kind by a little id say this one is better than even king of technology which i absolutely and am still reading. please keep posting new chapters.

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JohnPlume

I want to start off by saying I love the concept. Some of my favorite novels on this site are stories that bring pop culture to another world like the Black Tech Internet Cafe System or Bringing Culture to Another World. Also, I loved some of the pop culture choices that the author chose to utilize. I am a huge fan of One Piece and you never see western cartoons like the Jetsons referenced. However, while I loved the concept of the story, I felt like execution of the story could have been greatly improved. It felt like the author was just rushing to add as much stuff/new features in the park as possible in an effort to keep the audience's attention rather than properly exploring any one feature with any depth. Take the Rosie Robots as an example. They were first added in the very beginning of the story when the park is first created. I thought they would be a great comedic character. Not only would they have a funny way to handle troublemakers, they were described as being sassy like the original which made me look forward to other funny interactions between the Rosies and the other characters. However, Rosie was never properly developed. Rosie never took any actions or even spoke until chapter 89 when she finally handled her first troublemakers. And after those troublemakers were handled, she has not done anything since. Furthermore, we have never seen her act sassy like her original counterpart. You could have replaced rosey with a generic robot/puppet and had the same result. You had the potential for a great character completely go to waste because you did not explore it. Some features I still don't fully get like the mission center. Can independent people post missions or are they all connected/posted by the park? What does the park even do with the items collected for missions like the fire Chu Che collected in the demonstration mission? Besides cleaning, what other missions are available to the general townsfolk (after all with the installation of self cleaning roads some of the cleaning jobs would have been eliminated)? The simulation pavilion is a similar as I don't really get how that is different from the virtual reality video games or what are the options for that feature since you are only now exploring the Snakes and Ladders option despite mentioning it many chapters ago. These are all things that I could have learned fairly early on, but because the author did not spend tons of time to explore the concept, I still don't fully get these features. In all honesty, I feel like if the author simply used a quarter of the features he had in the story and focused on exploring on each feature in greater depth from various different perspectives, the story would have been more well rounded and engaging. Take One Piece for example, all we saw was that people thought the first episode was interesting. However, readers don't read this kind of story to just see characters mindlessly say a list of pop culture items are cool. Instead, they want to see how pop culture is viewed from vastly different perspectives and how they would affect/impact different environments. When you introduced One Piece, all everyone says is that the first episode is interesting and that everyone calls Luffy, Senior Luffy. However, would everyone call him that? After all, Luffy is a young, dumb, lighthearted teen? Would serious people fixated on decorum and who are hundreds of years old really call him Senior? Plus for the honorable sects, what would they feel about rooting for a pirate? Would they feel like it is dishonorable, would they not care since cultivators rob people as well for cultivation resources (which is a problem in of itself/something to explore), or do they learn to recognize people more for their actions rather than their labels through this story? What new moves can people who have similar yet still distinctly different fighting styles create (ex. swordfighters who don't want to use three swords or martial artists who don't have luffy's stretchiness)? What do the people think about seeing a story happen on the ocean? Is there an ocean in the lower realm? Have many people in that region seen the ocean (especially more local individuals that have not travelled far)? Are people now inspired to sail? Can the design of the sailing ships serve as inspiration and are easier to copy than modern technology? Having an entire arc focused on multiple One Piece episodes and from various perspectives would allow the audience to learn a lot more about the world in general. I also have questions about X-Men. Why were the audience able to sense qi from the characters and learn their special abilities? After all, the X-Men did not really learn their skills, they were born with them. They are genetic mutations, closer to inborn natural features like a hair color or an extra hand rather than skills naturally learned. As such, how were they able to mimic them? If the X-Men and other superheroes like the Hulk (which is always attributed to radiation) have Qi, it begs the question, what even is Qi? And no one found it strange that Iron Man was so strong even without any Qi or did they somehow think the electricity/power source of the suits were the same thing as Qi? Also, to me, it would have been cooler for characters to put in effort towards learning skills instead of automatically being granted skills by simply reading. Even if it is just adapting the skills they already had in new ways (ex. the sword control skill could be expanded to Magneto's metal control) to mimic the skills of characters and work for those skills instead of being handed on a silver platter. These are all things you can explore. The point is not to just say different features or properties are cool. If that was all readers wanted than they would read a list rather than a novel. The point is to use those pop culture properties to explore various characters, see different ways they can influence people, and the world in general. You have plenty of stuff already in the novel which deserves more exploration. Don't feel like you need to add something new every three chapters. Also, be more careful with the spelling. It seems like every chapter there is at least one word that rhymes with the word you actually meant. When you write the word "shower" instead of "cower" you know things are bad. If the author takes their time more, I feel like the story would be a lot better.

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Geratriges

I hope this one is good, it remind me of black Tech Internet Cafe although I stopped reading it bc of the almost racist stuff. Big fan doe read your other work since it had like 3 chapters.

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ACE_KinGz

Can u update it once a day ? Or 5 chap A week ? It's a nice story .. but slow updating !! ☹️ It take's 4ever .. just to reach 200chap .. it's like 8 or 7 chapter a month 😔 Moarrr !! Moarrr !! Moarrr !!

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Immortal_Soul_King

Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃.

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TimHQ

I think it's really good, only slight issue is that there are some grammar mistakes but it's nothing major. All in all a good concept which is well executed

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lVl

It's fun to read. If possible it would be nice if chapters are added every other day[img=update]. Kidding! As long as the chapters are well made then take all the time you need mr./ms./mrs. author.

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Ganoush

An interesting concept and actively updated, you have my read till the end. rest is spam so I can post the review. hi how is your day? hope your doing well.

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ShadowMonarch_Levi

I love it 😘😘 pls update more 😍 it's fun reading the story and I love the way system and MC is interacting to each other it's fun 🤪 and I also love the way how all buildings has mystery and those membership cards 🤣 it's just like a phone

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Great_Young_Master

I'm writing this review due to one problem I have. I'm not just just talking about this novel alone but also the King of Technology (haven't read the newest one.) The problem is that the author stretches things to the extreme. Arcs that should be over in like 2-3 chapters are over 5. I don't care if english is your main language or not. Writing a story is universal so it doesn't matter if you wrote your whole novel in Spanish or something. However, you're still suffering the same problem that you have with your other story. You have written over 1000 chapters in the King of Technology so you're obviously dedicated in making stories but you gotta fix your story development. It's so slow. And it's slow because you're stretching it with pointless stuff. I think I've said this to your other novel before but I'm making a review this time. You have talent in writing and I really believe that so I hope you consider this review I made. -See ya.

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Nizhal

Are you really the author of i am the king of technology!? To be frank am a great fan of kong of technology, but this novel is not even half good as that. The story beginning was good but it's all get ruiend from MC tell about his handsome dumb things, and some places where didn't have enough explanation. I read up to chapter 24 and seeing more of MC's shameless and dumb handsome comments. I sinisterly hope to see a MC like king of technology in the future chapters of the novel.

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Lordmarvel1

Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅. Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Don't miss out on great adventure Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅

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TheOtakuGod

One of the best novels that I read. The face-slapping could become a problem but that doesn't give me a reason to not put 5 stars. Simply perfect, also author are you chinese or English because it doesn't say translator in the novel.

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Alter_CAT

just reading the resume. I can tell that it will be hilarious. definitely all cultivators needs entertainment in their lives instead of been cultivating all along

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Knightmares

when I 1st saw it I was expecting for at least 1 entire kingdom to know about MC at 150 chapters but we are still in the Beginning"village" . I can only hope to read it soon.

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FearlessCloud01

Big fan of King of Tech and just as big of a hater of Cultivation and Wuxia. (I hate them so much that I started a novel just to diss them.) That being said, I am absolutely loving this series so far. And yes, this is basically 100% cultivation/wuxia. I hope that is sufficient to explain just how good this series is. This series presents wuxia in a way that even a thorough hater of most Chinese content like me loves it.