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Thrust into a world of cultivation and martial spirits. Dante is reborn as the son of the First Elder of his clan.
Born with a weaker physique. Dante didn't plan on fighting against the world, but the sudden awakening of his martial spirit made him realize he could be much more than he ever imagined.....
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Tulis ulasanamazing , that's all I can say. it has more then 5 characters that aren't brainless which alone is insane for a cultivation story. already love it even though I'm not done with it.
Itโs an okay idea. Itโs not original since thereโs been novels with the same premise as martial spirits or battle souls, but it seems the author decided to use western names despite being in eastern culture. It really isnโt a problem for the normal reader except some cultivation fans. The problem is the grammatical errors. Thereโd also some spelling mistakes here and there. Suggest author install grammarly on his device. It would improve the novel. Anyway that all for now, might change my review in the futureโฆ
Interesting story the plot is very good, the protagonist's personality is amazing, harem I don't know if there will be a heroine or will appear later on I hope so
This shameless author deleted my review(people commented on it, webnovel didnโt delete it), so Iโm gonna make another. Writing Quality-6/10, not really that good but readable. Updating Stability-4/5 Story Development- pretty generic but with a twist, 3.5 but Iโll round up cause you canโt do that on wn Character Development- Pretty bad, 4/10 World Background- meh, 4/5 The Verdict- trash for veterans, great for newbies
Well, I am here to inform others that how short the chapter is.. You just need at most one minute and probably less to finish to read one chapter.. It's the shortest chapter I ever see in any novel.. If you saw 263 chapters, it is actually equal to 80 chapters only.. And it has long been abandoned.. Seeing how short the length of the chapter is, the author probably doesn't have any excitement on writing. He seems to write it to test the water on how far he can go with his imaginary.. And not because he is interesting or anything.. So, once he is bored, he just stops it and ignores everything that happens here.. You can feel it when you read his novel, no enthusiastic at all..
Quite frankly, this one has a lot of wasted potential There's a lot to improve author The grammer is just something enough to be rated as readable, not something I'd prefer, but still read it Story development is quite slow, though that's my personal opinion, I just don't like these kinda excruciatingly slow novels Character design needs a lot of improvement, I recommend research on psychology author, your character is VERY inconsistent with what you tell him or try to portray him as, to me it seems as though you have no idea how truly prideful individuals behave and I'm not talking about ones that hide their insecurities with a layer of pride and arrogance I'm talking about truly prideful ones, they don't go around gawking at anything remotely "impressive" like your character does because to them, they themselves are more impressive than majority of stuff around them, they don't really show a lot of emotions either, you really just forget about your characters pride majority of time, that's not how that works man. World background is ok I guess, since we haven't really explored a lot in this area. My review can change in future. Tho ngl, this is pretty good if you're writing for the first time author. I hope you improve in the future.
Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated
well the story's great and I don't see the usual cultivation where "your courting death " lol ๐๐๐๐ . wordcountwordcountwordcountwordcount pls don't drop pls don't drop wordcountwordcountwordcountwordcount pls don't drop pls don't dropwordcountwordcountwordcountwordcount pls don't drop pls don't dropwordcountwordcountwordcountwordcount pls don't dropwordcountwordcountwordcountwordcount pls don't drop pls don't dropwordcountwordcountwordcountwordcount pls don't drop pls don't drop plswordcountwordcountwordcountwordcount pls don't drop pls don't drop don'twordcountwordcountwordcountwordcount pls don't drop pls don't drop dropwordcountwordcountwordcountwordcount pls don't drop pls don't drop
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another fake op mc, don't waste your time on this if your here for an op mc, because he's not. tired of all these fake tags. either way its obvious he will take forever to leave the starter zone and its dad since he has dragon spirits you would expect alot more from that
Well the concept is good, too much meta thug lines that's for sure, if you read CN novel much you can skip large amount of the side extra mobs lines they are basically parrot repeating themselves. MC power feels mediocre to go too deep at cause its just the usual power-gain stuff. --- IMHO : Too much cringeworthy lines, skill name are too much exaggeration *maybe cause MC skills use "dragon"*. If you like no-brainer straightforward power doping MC ig this is your read.
story is well thought out so far. however the grammar is poorly written though it is able to be followed so I think it is a matter of lazy writing rather than lack of ability.
this story is awesome but only complaint is that he never updates l. he used to update everyday now it's maybe once a month. it sucks that we can't read it everyday. I wanted this to be one of my 5 top books that I would get to grow with. but now it's like I wont spend anything on this book because of the lack of new content
overall I love this story I just would love to get more chapters. if you were to update regularly I would be almost addicted to your story and I want to read as much as possible. please speed up your reading we know something big is coming later on please don't take a year to get started again. you definitely have one of the best stories on web novel so far and I have read about 100 already
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Penulis NineSleepyDragons
So far so good. The writting is consistant and the character is interesting. I cannot wait for more! The only thing that is weird iS that the autors name is 9 dragons and The MC only has 7!๐