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amazing , that's all I can say. it has more then 5 characters that aren't brainless which alone is insane for a cultivation story. already love it even though I'm not done with it.
Personally I love the storyline and character development but recently there hasn’t been any new chapters coming out and after the 4 month mark with no news on why I fear that this novel will be left unfinished.
Well, I am here to inform others that how short the chapter is.. You just need at most one minute and probably less to finish to read one chapter.. It's the shortest chapter I ever see in any novel.. If you saw 263 chapters, it is actually equal to 80 chapters only.. And it has long been abandoned.. Seeing how short the length of the chapter is, the author probably doesn't have any excitement on writing. He seems to write it to test the water on how far he can go with his imaginary.. And not because he is interesting or anything.. So, once he is bored, he just stops it and ignores everything that happens here.. You can feel it when you read his novel, no enthusiastic at all..
another fake op mc, don't waste your time on this if your here for an op mc, because he's not. tired of all these fake tags. either way its obvious he will take forever to leave the starter zone and its dad since he has dragon spirits you would expect alot more from that
this story is awesome but only complaint is that he never updates l. he used to update everyday now it's maybe once a month. it sucks that we can't read it everyday. I wanted this to be one of my 5 top books that I would get to grow with. but now it's like I wont spend anything on this book because of the lack of new content
This was one of the best novels I have ever read. It is really detailed and with great backstory. The enemy and protagonist design is lovely. Definitely 100% recommend
Starting from the top, I love this MC. the system/cultivation setup is just right so that everything flows together and the world so far is intriguing. Now comes the bad stuff. I maxed this story out and purchased privilege for the month but the writers CPW (chapters per week) have fallen like a brick. I invested because I was looking at an average of 1-2 chapters a day and now I'll be lucky if I figure out what happens with Rebecca by the end of the month.
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I really enjoy the novel I think it would have a lot more success if it had a better release schedule at least 4-5 chapter a week. The potential is for all to see. I really hope we start getting a better release schedule or more info on future release schedules.
author the MC will only have 7 dragon souls? I was thinking about elemental dragons like fire and others like lightning but as the title is 7 souls and he already has a soul that is not "elemental"I'm thinking that the number of souls in the title doesn't match the elements and dragons of other types and will make the dragons limited
This shameless author deleted my review(people commented on it, webnovel didn’t delete it), so I’m gonna make another. Writing Quality-6/10, not really that good but readable. Updating Stability-4/5 Story Development- pretty generic but with a twist, 3.5 but I’ll round up cause you can’t do that on wn Character Development- Pretty bad, 4/10 World Background- meh, 4/5 The Verdict- trash for veterans, great for newbies
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Hasta aquà todo bien. La escritura es consistente y el personaje es interesante. ¡No puedo esperar más! ¡Lo único extraño es que el nombre del autor es 9 dragones y The MC solo tiene 7! 😂
From one writer to another, your story is a good one. I'm not really a fan of cultivation novels, but I found myself enjoying this one. Now... that said, your grammar needs work. Some grammatical errors were so obvious, that it was downright confusing for me, as to how you missed them. In fact... that was the sole reason I couldn't give you more than a 3-star review.
Membuka SPOILER overall I love this story I just would love to get more chapters. if you were to update regularly I would be almost addicted to your story and I want to read as much as possible. please speed up your reading we know something big is coming later on please don't take a year to get started again. you definitely have one of the best stories on web novel so far and I have read about 100 already
Please please please edit your chapters before you submit them. Tbh I was looking forward to reading this as it has a good premise but it’s too hard to read so I just gave up. I don’t see that many other people saying anything abt the grammar or spelling so I’m guessing this will be deleted but at least try editing the first few chapters before you delete this.
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Hasta aquà todo bien. La escritura es consistente y el personaje es interesante. ¡No puedo esperar más! ¡Lo único extraño es que el nombre del autor es 9 dragones y The MC solo tiene 7! 😂
So far it is pretty good . But there are few grammatical errors . Also the story is a bit slow ( I do know that it has been like 100 episodes only and we are just getting into the plot ) . Thank You for the chapters
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Well the concept is good, too much meta thug lines that's for sure, if you read CN novel much you can skip large amount of the side extra mobs lines they are basically parrot repeating themselves. MC power feels mediocre to go too deep at cause its just the usual power-gain stuff. --- IMHO : Too much cringeworthy lines, skill name are too much exaggeration *maybe cause MC skills use "dragon"*. If you like no-brainer straightforward power doping MC ig this is your read.
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Quite frankly, this one has a lot of wasted potential There's a lot to improve author The grammer is just something enough to be rated as readable, not something I'd prefer, but still read it Story development is quite slow, though that's my personal opinion, I just don't like these kinda excruciatingly slow novels Character design needs a lot of improvement, I recommend research on psychology author, your character is VERY inconsistent with what you tell him or try to portray him as, to me it seems as though you have no idea how truly prideful individuals behave and I'm not talking about ones that hide their insecurities with a layer of pride and arrogance I'm talking about truly prideful ones, they don't go around gawking at anything remotely "impressive" like your character does because to them, they themselves are more impressive than majority of stuff around them, they don't really show a lot of emotions either, you really just forget about your characters pride majority of time, that's not how that works man. World background is ok I guess, since we haven't really explored a lot in this area. My review can change in future. Tho ngl, this is pretty good if you're writing for the first time author. I hope you improve in the future.
The story is good just that there are minor mistakes in grammer, but readable. Just dont drop it and continue writing.
So far so good. The writting is consistant and the character is interesting. I cannot wait for more! The only thing that is weird iS that the autors name is 9 dragons and The MC only has 7!😂
amazing , that's all I can say. it has more then 5 characters that aren't brainless which alone is insane for a cultivation story. already love it even though I'm not done with it.
Personally I love the storyline and character development but recently there hasn’t been any new chapters coming out and after the 4 month mark with no news on why I fear that this novel will be left unfinished.
Well, I am here to inform others that how short the chapter is.. You just need at most one minute and probably less to finish to read one chapter.. It's the shortest chapter I ever see in any novel.. If you saw 263 chapters, it is actually equal to 80 chapters only.. And it has long been abandoned.. Seeing how short the length of the chapter is, the author probably doesn't have any excitement on writing. He seems to write it to test the water on how far he can go with his imaginary.. And not because he is interesting or anything.. So, once he is bored, he just stops it and ignores everything that happens here.. You can feel it when you read his novel, no enthusiastic at all..
another fake op mc, don't waste your time on this if your here for an op mc, because he's not. tired of all these fake tags. either way its obvious he will take forever to leave the starter zone and its dad since he has dragon spirits you would expect alot more from that
this story is awesome but only complaint is that he never updates l. he used to update everyday now it's maybe once a month. it sucks that we can't read it everyday. I wanted this to be one of my 5 top books that I would get to grow with. but now it's like I wont spend anything on this book because of the lack of new content
This was one of the best novels I have ever read. It is really detailed and with great backstory. The enemy and protagonist design is lovely. Definitely 100% recommend
Starting from the top, I love this MC. the system/cultivation setup is just right so that everything flows together and the world so far is intriguing. Now comes the bad stuff. I maxed this story out and purchased privilege for the month but the writers CPW (chapters per week) have fallen like a brick. I invested because I was looking at an average of 1-2 chapters a day and now I'll be lucky if I figure out what happens with Rebecca by the end of the month.
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I really enjoy the novel I think it would have a lot more success if it had a better release schedule at least 4-5 chapter a week. The potential is for all to see. I really hope we start getting a better release schedule or more info on future release schedules.
author the MC will only have 7 dragon souls? I was thinking about elemental dragons like fire and others like lightning but as the title is 7 souls and he already has a soul that is not "elemental"I'm thinking that the number of souls in the title doesn't match the elements and dragons of other types and will make the dragons limited
This shameless author deleted my review(people commented on it, webnovel didn’t delete it), so I’m gonna make another. Writing Quality-6/10, not really that good but readable. Updating Stability-4/5 Story Development- pretty generic but with a twist, 3.5 but I’ll round up cause you can’t do that on wn Character Development- Pretty bad, 4/10 World Background- meh, 4/5 The Verdict- trash for veterans, great for newbies
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Hasta aquà todo bien. La escritura es consistente y el personaje es interesante. ¡No puedo esperar más! ¡Lo único extraño es que el nombre del autor es 9 dragones y The MC solo tiene 7! 😂
From one writer to another, your story is a good one. I'm not really a fan of cultivation novels, but I found myself enjoying this one. Now... that said, your grammar needs work. Some grammatical errors were so obvious, that it was downright confusing for me, as to how you missed them. In fact... that was the sole reason I couldn't give you more than a 3-star review.
Membuka SPOILER overall I love this story I just would love to get more chapters. if you were to update regularly I would be almost addicted to your story and I want to read as much as possible. please speed up your reading we know something big is coming later on please don't take a year to get started again. you definitely have one of the best stories on web novel so far and I have read about 100 already
Please please please edit your chapters before you submit them. Tbh I was looking forward to reading this as it has a good premise but it’s too hard to read so I just gave up. I don’t see that many other people saying anything abt the grammar or spelling so I’m guessing this will be deleted but at least try editing the first few chapters before you delete this.
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Hasta aquà todo bien. La escritura es consistente y el personaje es interesante. ¡No puedo esperar más! ¡Lo único extraño es que el nombre del autor es 9 dragones y The MC solo tiene 7! 😂
So far it is pretty good . But there are few grammatical errors . Also the story is a bit slow ( I do know that it has been like 100 episodes only and we are just getting into the plot ) . Thank You for the chapters
There’s usually the fire cultivation lines like you’re Courting death etc. lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllcjdndbdbndndndjdjdjdndnddndnfjfjfnfnfncncncnfnnrjf
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Well the concept is good, too much meta thug lines that's for sure, if you read CN novel much you can skip large amount of the side extra mobs lines they are basically parrot repeating themselves. MC power feels mediocre to go too deep at cause its just the usual power-gain stuff. --- IMHO : Too much cringeworthy lines, skill name are too much exaggeration *maybe cause MC skills use "dragon"*. If you like no-brainer straightforward power doping MC ig this is your read.
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Quite frankly, this one has a lot of wasted potential There's a lot to improve author The grammer is just something enough to be rated as readable, not something I'd prefer, but still read it Story development is quite slow, though that's my personal opinion, I just don't like these kinda excruciatingly slow novels Character design needs a lot of improvement, I recommend research on psychology author, your character is VERY inconsistent with what you tell him or try to portray him as, to me it seems as though you have no idea how truly prideful individuals behave and I'm not talking about ones that hide their insecurities with a layer of pride and arrogance I'm talking about truly prideful ones, they don't go around gawking at anything remotely "impressive" like your character does because to them, they themselves are more impressive than majority of stuff around them, they don't really show a lot of emotions either, you really just forget about your characters pride majority of time, that's not how that works man. World background is ok I guess, since we haven't really explored a lot in this area. My review can change in future. Tho ngl, this is pretty good if you're writing for the first time author. I hope you improve in the future.
The story is good just that there are minor mistakes in grammer, but readable. Just dont drop it and continue writing.
So far so good. The writting is consistant and the character is interesting. I cannot wait for more! The only thing that is weird iS that the autors name is 9 dragons and The MC only has 7!😂