I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man

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MrXmc

The system is clearly unnecessary in this story, the idea is incredible, but adding a system to this story spoils all the intensity and interest in the work

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XP_HAVOK

I love the story and it is a great idea and I hope you continue on with your story but it's not for me it's to fast paced were he doesn't really work hard for his powers. For me it takes away a massive chunk of who spider man is the hardwork and determination he has. Most people don't realize but spiderman while stronger then almost every single villain is usually shown to be weaker cause he doesn't kill or try to hurt his villains he always looks for a different option. While he is strong he constantly looks for ways to improve himself and his abilities. So each spider man is unique in their own way and with how this is going I don't see him becoming his own version of spiderman just mimicking the hero he looked up to. Also making it where there is template's he can aquire were he can get a person's skills and hardwork that they poured their entire life into doesn't sit right with me. To get that without any of the hardships or Training it's like giving a person Ironmans suit so now he is iron man when it's the person who makes the hero and the hero they become inspire others to be better versions of themselves.

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River_Sunshine

I support you my friend I am your number 1 fan,please guys support my friend

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Ruzzzy

Well, it was weird at the beginning, but then it became more interesting as was explored more of the character's backstory. I would completely change the beginning, adding more surprise from the transfer to other universe, misunderstanding of what is happening before the system appears, and again before its appearance (where information about the universe is revealed and info about when the original Spider-Man appears) not to show the protagonist’s obsession with mentoring

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Game_B_Roll

The story is good and everything the only problem that this novel has is the fight scenes!! Mainly because the attribute difference because in many situations even if the attribute difference ain't even like 50% for a few attributes the MC just gets manhandled which doesn't make sense especially in earlier fights when enemies didn't have special powers!! Like MC can defeat the bullies when they have multiple times more attributes and more combat skills cause of his superpowers which makes perfect sense. But when MC has better skills but latter on the enemy had just s bit more attributes the MC needs a power up even if because of MC's superpowers even if he had 50% more attributes MC should suppress them!! So like a lot of fights are unnecessarily long. Author you do know that it would be good if this was animated but reading it all you just like lose track of what is even happening unless you meditate to perfectly picture the fight in your head which is like the biggest problem here!! ***** Author this novel currently gives the vibes it is in its last phases. So it is that true of will it go on for +200 more chapters.

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jackson_smith

THE_V1S1ON Excellent Fanfic Keep up the great work. You can do this Spiderman fanfic idea directly after I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man I'm Miles Morales, so what? This story will be completely different; our hero is not the altruist we are used to seeing him. He is a person who acts only for his and his women's well-being. Trent was a gamer and loved to play the Marvel's Spider-Man series by Insomniac Games until he woke up in the body of Miles Morales at the start of Marvel’s Spider-Man: Miles Morales. Harem Ebony Brown Cristal (Boondocks) Luna (Boondocks) Lakeisha Grant Monet Stewart Tejada Diana Tejada Jessica Figueroa Raquel Thomas Dee Dee Tubbs Roberta Tubbs Donna Tubbs

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DinckleNinckle

The writing is a little butt, and the way he describes things is a little weird. Also, the conversations don't sound normal. Overall, it's a good novel, a little hard to read, but a great find nonetheless. 

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DaoistPCowBD

Idea is good, mc is inconsistent, people around him are cardboards, author said it's 1947 but can't deliver it at all. MCs wasn't fighter or athlete at all but with abilities that shouldn't improve that he suddenly became one. Overall, starter chapters is a total mess.

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shadedgrove

It's a really cool story. Got pretty into it at the beginning, but dropped off due to all the different POVs. That and it seems like you're constantly being whiplashed back 10 minutes before to see what 6 or 7 other characters were doing while the mc was busy.

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esperomejorar

TRAGEDY? .

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Salazarson

Will they be 'Inheritors' and Morlun in the story?

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Elfalal750

great story with good character design .keep going author 👏

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GOLDIROG

wonderful novel, great ideas keep it going

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Flash_YT

When is this story gonna be done it so good am lowkey who the love interest

I support your novels author 💕 keep it Up

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Chattycat

first time reading fanfic, by far this is good 💕

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Baby_Boss_6566

AWESOME 👍👍 AUTHOR NOT BAD THE PLOT IS GOOD , BOOK 1 NEED MKRE CHAPTERS

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Rottenrobot

This is a good novel. , it's a Spider-Man fanfic where he will mentor Peter parker. i will change ny rate maybe after 30 chapters if its good or not for now i rate this 5