In general, this is a pretty good story in HP AU, it’s strange that it was somehow deprived of attention.. There’s nothing to complain about so far, although I’m the type of person, uhum, who likes a good story with a harem, just a good story is still good :)
what's happening in Fallout is a different timeline... technology doesn't appear out of nowhere, the Internet began to develop in the 1980s, and even later when companies started storing their data with access to the network... plus he tracks everything with cameras as if they were stuck everywhere, crawls with a tablet, in this period of time these are impossible technologies even for science fiction... otherwise Howard Stark calmly assembled his suit with a reactor..
I still don’t understand in what year the actions take place.. supposedly there was a newspaper from 1963, there is Howard Stark, which means no later than the 1990s, but technology is somehow too developed for this time period..
honestly, I don't see any problem with a harem in a story with this kind of character development, and in general it’s normal, there are stories where there is a main and secondary female interest
there’s something wrong with the ages of the characters and timeline, this is the time before the second ninja war, that is, 30-35 years before the events of the canon, and here Fugaku is 19? He is born at the 32th year officially... And then Mikoto is 14, although she is a couple of years older than Kushina and Minato, who almost did not participate in the second war and were 11-12 years old at the end of war. And Hiruzen became Hokage in 19th year after 1st war ending with death of the 2nd Hokage..[img=faceslap]
For the first time in a long time, really good work on the HP fandom. And that the main thing is not a translation or AI written garbage. Respect to the author, and more inspiration :)
It was great, the mc is thrown into an unusual situation and he gets out as best he can. But at one moment... BOOM... the tree of life, the energy of nature, the devil fruits from the world of One Piece... and you're just like: "What the fuck is going on here?"[img=Shocked]
Um, what about the mission to rescue the sealed girl?
The story has potential, it's interesting to read, but it needs a LOT of editing... the text is repeated, names are changing, pronouns for men are female, for women they are masculine... in general, after editing it will be a pleasure to read
but I almost had a fit when I saw the price list on Patreon 😨🫣
Harry Potter: The Legend of Nero Ravenclaw
Book&Literature · Suiijin