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HP transmigrated into Domeric Bolton (GOT and HP crossover)
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Harry Potter dies at the age of 28 in an accident by falling through the Veil. His soul travels through dimensions and end up in the body of 7 year old Domeric Bolton who recently died due to a horse accident.
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I gave you 5 Stars at the beginning but this went from amazing to Stupid as hell. He has magic ,enchanted armor, an enchanted Body etc etc but he is basically nothing in Front of a white Walker, which is Stupid as hell. He gives away all his rescourses for free and is naive as ****. His aunt can ground him😑😑😑 he is a ****ing Lord not some Boy. Also it was normal at the middle age that Boys had more Power and authority then their mothers. Different for Ladys and queens but still.... One word: Stupid
The Mc is either stupid or acts stupid why in the name of hell is he helping his future enemies, I understand everyone likes the starks but seriously this Mc is acting stupid, why is he bowing so much. Why does he care about the king so much put him under an imperious man for gods sake the worlds about to end and you still allow that oaf to move around and use his authority, the least he should’ve done was conquer the north and reconstruct as soon as he found out that the zombies are coming, honestly the other houses aren’t going to be much help there only a hindrance. He has to bloody look after a lord or lady every single chapter, he’s always protecting them what’s the point of allowing to wield their titles if their uses less. In fact with magic and so much strength why pay taxes for so long when you knew that the end was coming. Honestly the Mc is acting good for a world like Game of thrones, selling Valyrian steel to Tywin how can you be so stupid, just rob him of all the his gold let him explain that. The fact the Robert has a strong will to be able to fight a compulsion is the biggest joke in the whole story.
It’s good but there are too many small things that end up being huge. Like he recruits wargs and such and then creates Wyverns for them even though they are practically dragons lol and most areas don’t have a lot of magic but for some reason the MC decides to never learn to use a sword or fight lol makes no sense to me. That’s why i have it a 2.6/5 instead of full 5/5.... too many problems
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Man I love this type of novel. Harry potter with magic and might in GOT. I loved the wild Westeros and others like it and I know I will love this if the author continues to keep the quality and speed of Chapters going.
I post this review after chapter 28 (final one for me),MC is on "snap my finger and it's done mode",It's ridiculous how easy everything is for him he doesn't have to work hard about anything,literally anything,boring as f progression and development,everyone is just a puppet that he charms to suit his needs without having to actually think how to get them to cooperate without using Imperio on them,If he is able to just charm and use imperio on anyone,what's the point in reading this?he will have no true enemies because he can just Imperio them,he can also steal a spy network from Littlefinger and Varys,no need to work hard on building one himself,he can steal all talents form other lords,even get Euron Greyjoy to be his fleet admiral (w t f?),he charms 4 year old Sansa to have a crush on him and Rob to be his friend,he steals gold in the millions,he also doesn't have to worry about spies in his domain because,well,magic.Not one soul of the people who work for him are truly loyal,they are under imperio (and some kind of loyalty charms?)except his aunt with who he has a rather weird relationship imo,Apparently she is the only ***** who has ever been kind to him(looks like we forgot Hagrid,Molly and Arthur Weasley,S.Black,Remus,Minerva,Dumbledore even Snape after he saw his memories and realized just how much he owes him,enough to give his name to his son).MC is not even Harry anymore,i don't even know who he is..He is also thinking of creating modern weapons which will completely cause GOT world to loose it's charm imo.Overall this is a massive waste of time and how it got to be in the top 10 ranked 9 in the originals power ranking is beyond me.I tried to read at least until chapter 35 before i post a review but i truly cannot bring myself to read this anymore,not even remotely entertaining.
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This is admittedly the first GoT fanfic I have ever read, so I'm not too sure about how it is handled normally. For me GoT is too much action to handle the butterfly effect🤷🏻♂️. The following may include some spoilers** Writing quality: our author is using the English language better than nearly all the translators here on WN ( what admittedly isn't too hard). Still some spelling mistakes are there and the vocabulary used is still in the middle stages. Stability of update: well there are 5 (when short) chapters per day. I would say nobody could complain about this one. I am still wondering how writers can produce that much text in this little time. Far from record holding but still an archivement here. Story development: * The story is a bit of an wish-come-true type. Personally, for reading it as a relaxing novel. It's not bad, even if it seems like he has a much to easy time getting what he wants. (*Spoiler-slight* Example: using legimens and oblivate to steal riches / using portkeys without end . And to not forget the most important part: he is getting rid of any backstabbing, by simply using magic, Theron destroying one of the pillars of GoT ) Character design:* spoiler* Our MC is Harry potter transmigrated to got, but somehow he doesn't behave like Harry at all. He is much to easy about using the forbidden spells, knowing his way about nearly every lore there is ( wandlore/warding etc) and obviously something in the past changed. Some other characters are induced(never play any role in the original series (what is not a bad point) but somehow instantly outshine their original counterparts. World background: * spoiler* The basics of GoT with all those secrets he managed to include. Which itself is an archivement! Again he has a bit too much information ( all of it) which is a bit boring, but makes the story predictable. Conclusion: Even if it didn't sound like it, I think the story has the basics to be a good read. One of the only ones I am still actively reading on WN. (Too much wuxia Here) The 'harry' could be changed to something else, only the magic part would be important.
Ankit-sama!!!!!! Darn it, I didn't know you had write a new Harry Potter fanfic.... Last one had make me feel that you would be a great writer, bit sadly you didn't continue it... But still, it's okay since you write again!!!!!! Thank you, don't drop in the first year of Hogwarts... Or should I say, first season of GOT...
I have binged this story in 2 hours. Author this is an awesome story. Please update more.I have binged this story in 2 hours. Author this is an awesome story. Please update more.I have binged this story in 2 hours. Author this is an awesome story. Please update more.
if anyone has the next 100 chapters, upload them somewhere so that the author gets what he deserves. I mean I don't get how he says one thing and does another. If he was truthful from the start, I wouldn't had any problems with him but he got greedy and stopped uploading. And I am not willing to spend my hard earned money on a story that is getting dragged to meet the plot. Still I would like to know the read till the end.
"Please rest assured that whether you support me or not, I will not stop doing what I love. Nor will I deprive those who aren’t able/willing to support me of reading my work. It will always remain free!Please rest assured that whether you support me or not, I will not stop doing what I love. Nor will I deprive those who aren’t able/willing to support me of reading my work. It will always remain free!" You are full of shi*, half a year geos by and content is only on this fuc*** patreon xD
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It is among the TOP of my Fanfic and Game of Thrones. It has everything you could ask for ... Except the fact that the author likes to skip +18 scenes, for the love of the Ancients, the 7 and the new ones, he is in "Game of Thrones". I won't get tired of saying it. It is like taking the scenes out of him, in which one thinks: "That person is dangerous" or "he will become strong", only to see him die soon after. (Use a translator from Latin Spanish to English. In case you don't understand something)
It’s good but my main problem with it is the skipping he will say he’s going to some faraway place in one chapter and in the next he’ll already be back you don’t see him going there and you don’t see him there he’s just back and it happens all the time and with everything I hope the author can work on this problem.
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Requesting author to please continue writing... Best novel related to GOT that I have seen.. Definitely deserves to be continued..... Your FAN..
Honestly an excellent read, I’m not particularly knowledgeable about Game of Thrones myself, outside of watching one or two seasons, but I had no trouble whatsoever following the story and binge reading all the chapters, this is definitely a crossover story you should check out. Harry Potter and the story is smart and intelligent, and ruthless enough to survive. Honestly, I can’t express enough, but this is definitely a story you should check out.
I always like fanfic game of throne so high five bro! Mc can use magic which is good maybe too op but still good for me. And author always give more than 5 chap a day. Keep it up! This is great fiction!
Its not Harry Poter we know . Its not world Got we know. Autor try make somthing magical but he fail. Charakters have no soul like wood pupets. They not funyy . Mc dont have magic from HP . He weak but can do anything what autor can think. to big plot armor. Mc why HP?? better give Mc random name random guy from earth....