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Following the Shield

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Penulis: Cyanta

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this is my 2nd book (but by all means ik not abandoning my first book)

this book follows the MC who dies on earth and ends up in another world ! the MC will live out his new life as a her ?!

I also posted this on wattpad which also has picture to help people visualise it

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N0_Hope

Short lines with not enough details for it to be considered a story. It's more of a feeling to when you ask your school friend to writte the directions to his secret base on the forest and you are reading some nonsense . Too many time jumps and with so little detail it combines to make some random sentences trying to make something. lvl 40 at 12... great--- any explanation on how MC got there ? ---nope With no reason MC changes sex to a girl which has no reason, meaning or purpose at all . In general this story is so short and random I could call it a whatsapp chat.

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Not_A_Nenuphar

The mc thoughts are all over the place, coupled with an extremely fast passed monologue. It does not let you get acclimated to the story, instead it forces you to continue reading to try and make sense of it, its definitely a good Idea but the quality of writing isn't up to it, still, good luck with your novel author even if it's like this right now, experience is something you'll get with time, I'll continue reading to see future progress.

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Lazy_Fox111

👍 WQ: 3 SD: 3 CD: 3 US: 3 WB: 3 .

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