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LV 4

NotUse

The plot is interesting, it keeps me captivated as I continue to read this book. The world background is profoundly described, it keeps me motivated to continue reading this book. The story quality is excellent, I love the qualities of the characters, especially the MC. Keep up the good work author!!!👍👍👍

LV 13

Lazy_leon

Well the story is interesting naturally since it's about maguc abracadabra. Author Already released 7 chapters within a week so excellent update rate. A lot of grammar mistake better use grammarly 5 stars to cheer author up.

LV 4

MaxwellKHA

A very good book in my opinion. The plot develops naturally and I love it. I'm looking for more. I hope the author updates more often cause this is lit

LV 14

vinayraj

If you read this book, you definitely admire it. The beginning is good. Well background setting. Waiting for more chapters. Good luck with your work 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

LV 3

Bojuwoye_Ayoola

For a new book, the story and commercial status are progressing smoothly, I like that. I also like the fact that the writer is well descriptive and knows how to make a reader hooked. Thumbs up author

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