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Dominatrix System

Fantasy 245 Bab 2.2M Dilihat
Penulis: Madjic

4.64 (34 peringkat)

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Salvie passes away by a hit by the very people she blackmailed exploited and controlled. She finds herself in a Game of the gods in a universe with a system, in a competition that was randomized based on her personality. Watch with the gods as they entertain us for our amusement.

Warning the first few chapters are a bit rough since I had just started writing for the first time. Please Enjoy.


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Plow_19

I love this story❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Author, don't even think about abandoning this story or I will be mad. 👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿

4yr
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Tatsumi810

The novel already reached to a good point❤️ but still it would be better if the dear author added the Yuri tag (and more Yuri plot) to the novel👌, because many fans are searching for a good Yuri storyline and this can help them to find a good material storyline.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

3yr
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Body_Of_Breanna

Love this freaking book it is awesome but got one Issue please please please drop at least two pages at once 😭 i want read more then one page and u keeep leave me hangin. Drop something soon please

3yr
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Jasperthedoge

Great story, keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4yr
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Tayyab_Hassan

One of the best novels I have ever read. I love the plot. The main character is so badass. Side characters are also very interesting. specially, kitty keep up the good work and plz don't abandon the novel

3yr
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Tatsumi810

One more character added to the reverse harem in an unpredictable way❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ It's gotten so exiting😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

4yr
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lightace19

I don't normally go for domination one way or the other however I truly enjoy this novel the chapter length is great the characters are well made and as a story progresses more war about the world opens I truly enjoy this novel and look forward for more

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3yr
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Tayyab_Hassan

I love this novel. but it's getting really low paced lately pace it up a little plz. Also the story update timing is too small so plz at least provide a chapter every two days.

3yr
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PiceOfMetal

R I am I am I am I am I am I a I'm not 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 I am I am I am I am

4yr
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AXIAL_9811

wow ,one of the best novel on webnovel so far...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
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Normanpoppy

Fantastic read that i kinda regret bing reading but the detailing In both the Battles and Smur is freaking great gove it a try for a good read! 👍✨

3yr
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Tirell_Agarson

I was very respectful and careful in my assessment of your story. I had only gotten to either 18 or 20 some chapters in your story before I decided that it was not my cup of tea. the world background was very detailed and contained a lot of explanation which I enjoyed. as for the updating stability I cannot accurately give a rating as I have not personally received an update; for I have only started reading the story recently. your character design is very in-depth, although I did not really get to experience that much of the character I really enjoyed the story. for the story development I gave the highest rating possible for the length of time that I read your story. the writing quality leaves a little bit to be desired as I can easily tell that English is not your first language, or it is your first language and you're just having trouble like me in using grammar. either way it was very entertaining and I looked forward to more stories from you.

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Knucle

Okay so first off this is a combination story, so if you really want to understand everything going on you should also read the Futurani System that they made. Secondly it has very few mistakes (Like maybe one or two every 10 chapters) and it is really interesting doing a proper balance between **** and storytelling. The only thing I can possibly suggest is having two endings one for each story part (where both win and lose) That way people can still enjoy their choice of favorite.

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Lonely_Wendigo

I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!. - [ ]

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dragon_among_men

this is like the only dom fic thats really gets inro the nitty gritty stuff love it. [][][][]]]]][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][]

4yr
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Ideal_Beauty

It's a greats story so far, I'm on chapter 6 so I don't really know what up to come on the future chapters when I get there. Gonna be a little surprised :) but I like it so keep up good work!

4yr
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Ideal_Beauty

Started reading this story, and so far its really good. Even for the beginning! I'm all curious about what's going to happen next. Thank you for writing this, and also for your hard work! The main character of this novel/ story is amazing!

4yr
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Sacrefin

Just an awsome book great writing, need more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awsome awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I never write reviews but i just had to

4yr
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