DC: Son of Samael

LV 4

Scarface3699

Early on (4chapters) but the grammar is horrible and he switches from 1st to 3rd person in a confusing mess. Characters are also misgendered all the time like they'll be referred to as he and she in the same paragraph or sentence. This stuff stops the potential story underneath from even having a chance at being good

LV 3

azizbenhmida_and

good novel i hope you don't drop this fanfic

LV 4

Aady_Shrestha

Aside from bad grammar, the story is incredible. Do the grammar does make it a little hard to read. I’ll say this story is a diamond in the rough. I like the fact that the character is a genuinely good person and not a degenerate like so many. I’m so glad to have found a very good DC fanfic that’s not harem trash. I do think that the novel could use a Title cover to hopefully gain more views because this story has some serious potential.

LV 4

Yugi_Yugi

The authors has bad grammar the idea for the fanfic is very good and the author is trying to fix the grammar so if I had to say I will be a 8/10 -2 because of the grammar but everything else is perfect

LV 4

Enigma_9135

The story and character development is very good. The only issue would be grammar as there are some mistakes but still readable and able to understand.Good Work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 4

drake2378

the premise of the story itself is fine and the auther knows dc well enough that i don't think we will get glaring problems of not knowing what character can do what. the thing holding this back is its hard to understand. i get the general idea but its obvious the writter does not know how to write english very well. putting words in orders that are redundant. an example of the kind of the worst of it is ''he knows this cause he knows this'' where the sentence repeats itself and pronouns are often mixed op a he is referred to as a she than a he again in like 4 sentences. weirdly enough most everything is spelled correctly. i feel like if they could get a fan who knows english to help edit the story it would raise in quality to 4.5 or 5 stars

LV 3

misterEx

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LV 4

StupidUserName

The fanfic as of chapter 4 is interesting however despite this the grammar is troubling. If you don’t mind parsing through it, i would recommend reading it. P.s I would be happy to proof read if the author wants to hit me up.