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Beyond Earth:The horizon
4.05 (13 peringkat)
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The protagonist was chosen as the representative of a higher being and now he has to help it gain power and influence while traveling the multiverse. Why didn't the being just do everything alone? Go find out! Really, it's on the first one-two chaps...
The first few chaps are rather cringy, not because of the MC but because I tried to incorporate situations from the anime show into the book and that didn't go very well... But later? Oh boy, that's where the fun begins!
[NOT wish-fulfillment at least in my head]
[NOT harem at least.... in my head]
No romance for now
NO cultivation worlds-at least the strong ones
Worlds SPOILER!
IS-Infinite Stratos
Monster Hunter.
JOJO!
Attack on Titan
TAGS
Action-a little bit it depends on the situation
Adventure-.........
Reincarnation-Duh
Magic-later
Tech-read
Mech-read
Martial arts
Heavy Language(If you are a kid)
Time-skip
Slight emotional development(for character development)
Slight cringe(At the start, due to the original source being well... a harem romance)
Superhumans(Someone who can disassemble a mech with their hands isn't human)
And possibly more I will add later if I bother
I don't own the characters, the worlds, and the cover image, all the credit goes to their respective authors
English isn't my first language
I am not gaining money with this(writing this mostly for my boredom and for practice, and I don't have a bank account)
Thanks for checking by, please no review spawn nor shit-posting
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It is an awesome story. The protagonist is smart, strong but not overpowered. His primary source of power till now is Technologie; Mechas, Futuristic Guns. So be ware if you don't like that stuff but also who knows maybe it will change in the future.
5 star comments selling false hope. My motivation wasn't enough to carry me through so I dropped it getting close to the end of infinite stratos arc. And that is what I will review. Author if you gonna put a tag down please stick to it and don't bait anyone. A chapter named the world only god knows is very misleading and putting your character into infinite stratos instead of another mecha based franchise is questionable. The action and adventure aspect was quite lacking. Really hard to tell who's speaking unless you focus. Long walls of dialogue that leads nowhere. Personally I hardly cared about other characters. MC's personality never draws you in. Does the same boring stuff once reincarnated. The goddess, she's a back seat driver absolutely annoying. The author is kind of planning along and adjusting to the comments made.Good thing.Though there will be changes so keep that in mind. The writing is pretty decent than most other novels here. I gave extra points for the authors dedication. welp I'm out
Liked it really amazing on my point of view, cant wait for the next chapter man congrats, the history is really cool and the characters too
It's a pretty decent read, defenitely suggest giving it a go. It starts off in Infinite Stratos. Writing quality is decent. I got lucky and decided to pick it up because I was bored.
I'm really enjoying the narrative created by the author. I loved the nexus idea.I hope the story keeps advancing with new characters to improve the plot!
Right so far I love to story, however the Goddess/Patron interjecting and basically making him a...sigh I don't like this world but a "beta" mc and all this slapstick comedy, it just needs to be turned down or find a way to make the CP(Clone Patron) become an automated drone or status page type deal. because while the CP does give him information...I don't know it just feels off for me and if it keeps going on like this for the whole story...then ill have to drop the book. Nothing too you, the story isn't bad per se but its not to my tastes, so take anything I say will a pinch of salt and do what you think is best for you.
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I'll read this at aome point... maybe after I've caught up with the new Azimuth chaps
Hi, just here to fill in the 10th review :). From the synopsis I'll definitely give it a try. ......................................................
Welp this story is quite good compared to most famous fan fics where MCs just think with their... Though it has it's downsides, sometimes the dialogue gets a bit confusing at least from my standpoint and my brain just skips it all together. Overall it's quite good
There are many problems, it does get better in the later chapters, I'm in the 30s now. The problems I see in this. Is that any relationship he has within the worlds that he goes to will end when he goes to a different world. That limits the relationships he can have and how far those relationships can go. Meaning they can be friends, but they can't really be family. Even his mother and father don't really have the emotional connection. That they had in the first few chapters. Also, it seems he's always trying to improve, but he is never really making much progress. Like the author is trying to stretch the story longer without ever inserting anything new. Then there's some of the basic real big problems that have been showing up in a lot of fanfics lately. That's the description of the character being either lacking or non-existent. The description of things in the world like his IS, which is only said to be bulky and have triangle shapes on it somewhere and have drones. It kind of seems like you make him work really hard to invent things and make things and then gloss over them and have him. Just you start using them. It makes his invention and hard work seem ephemeral in a way. Luckily, I didn't drop this in the first chapters. Because the comedy that was injected by just having everybody be rude to the main character was not funny was kind of annoying. All in all, because he can't create any connections with the people that he's with. You can't have a girlfriend. You can't really have a sister. Can't really have a mother and father. Everybody can be kind of friends. But those friendships will end pretty soon once he leaves that world. It just makes it all seem wasted. Him helping Cecilia with cooking him. Getting close with any of the girls. It all seems wasted time and effort. Another issue would be that. After this world, he goes to another world where the same problems are repeated. He will work really hard to get stronger and make friends and allies then leave again to repeat again in the next world in the next. Now, I'm not sure how to solve that. That's a multi verse problem. The same problem happens with harems. Some of the problems can be fixed, like with the descriptions of the MC. And if you can't come up with a cool IS look that you like, just look one up on the internet and describe that and post a picture. I mean, this is fanfic. There's no rules against posting a picture to help people imagine the story better. If you can't find one, you can always use AI to create one. But there should be a lot of mech anime and AI pics to choose from.
Instead of spiling lots of useless words and making many fanfics, author could just concentrate on one of them and make something readable. Don't know what he's problem is. Lots of words on skills, their usages and of course not giving enough thought so those skills become not well balanced and if being OP is not such a problem, but not understanding them totally by himself makes mistakes (and then only one out of ten readers trully understand all the explanations of skills). And the reader would probably think the fighting actions etc gonna be with lots of details too but no, always a few words, to be precise most of fight scenes of this author is just time skips. Mc sees his enemy and fshuh, he lies dead with panting and seriously injured mc nearby
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Feels a bit generic, but sufficiently different from other novels. Im eager to see where the autor will take this, the nexus idea is very interesting. Just work on your writing skills a bit, and this story willl become a great one...