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Beauty and her Beast:The Don's obsession
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（Warning:Mature content,Raffaele is heavily obsessed with our little bella）
Beauty they say is in the eyes of the beholder.
Everybody desires beauty and love it.
What if it becomes a curse.
Bellarosa（Beautiful rose）Romano is the daughter of the cook of the powerful mafia Vincenti family.
She has been cared for and looked after since young by the Vincenti family when their eldest son and Don of the family decides to take up her and her mother's responsibility.
Bella has always been scared of the Don who criticises her at every mistake she makes.
Don Raffaele Vincenti is a man with IED intermittent explosise disoder.
An incident of the past led to this disorder of his and only few can calm him down.
Raffeale finds himself in a lustful obsession for the little woman who is in his care and with every growing day he desires her like a drug,oxygen and breathe.
Bella is terrified by his madness
Will she be willing to help him.
Secrets get unveiled on the way
～～～～～
Groaning he takes her hand and places it on his buldge his eyes clouded with desire and lust.
''Please Bella,Touch me''Raffaele growls out gasps escaping his lips while tears fall out of Bella's eyes as she tries to retrieve her hand from his grip.
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Dear author, Your story sounds interesting but you seem to have a lot of problems with the rules of writing. I could only make it a few chapters in before being irked by too many mistakes for me to ignore. Grammatical issues are peppered throughout your work. Basic stuff from not knowing that new sentences and names begin with capital letters, to correct inclusion of commas and punctuation, and even including spaces between words. I recommend using a resource to check your work if you don’t have any proofreader (eg free version of Grammarly is available). You will find more people willing to pay for chapters when you deliver a more polished product. Please take this as constructive criticism, I don’t aim to be mean here.