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Dear author, Your story sounds interesting but you seem to have a lot of problems with the rules of writing. I could only make it a few chapters in before being irked by too many mistakes for me to ignore. Grammatical issues are peppered throughout your work. Basic stuff from not knowing that new sentences and names begin with capital letters, to correct inclusion of commas and punctuation, and even including spaces between words. I recommend using a resource to check your work if you don’t have any proofreader (eg free version of Grammarly is available). You will find more people willing to pay for chapters when you deliver a more polished product. Please take this as constructive criticism, I don’t aim to be mean here.
Dear author, Your story sounds interesting but you seem to have a lot of problems with the rules of writing. I could only make it a few chapters in before being irked by too many mistakes for me to ignore. Grammatical issues are peppered throughout your work. Basic stuff from not knowing that new sentences and names begin with capital letters, to correct inclusion of commas and punctuation, and even including spaces between words. I recommend using a resource to check your work if you don’t have any proofreader (eg free version of Grammarly is available). You will find more people willing to pay for chapters when you deliver a more polished product. Please take this as constructive criticism, I don’t aim to be mean here.