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Have really enjoyed writing this novel so far, its done wonders for my writing ability. I hope to carry this on far into the future to create a world everyone can read and enjoy.
This novel has grown on me as I've been reading, I already left a review but I just MUST leave another, the writing is great, I love the characters and their dynamics, the world building is perfection, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
Really like it. I haven't found anything i think should improve with it and it has pretty fast new chapters 👍. So far it's pretty basic as an Isekai but it's not a bad thing the difference so far is that i think it's about two people. Im not entirely sure since it's still so early though.
Good start, draws you in. Looking forward to seeing the characters develop and to understand more of the imaginary world. Some errors but otherwise good writing & well conceived.
I guess I have to add this book to my collection... reincarnated as a baby, a new life and a new beginning. I am already curious about what would happen since the author didn't explain much in his synopsis, so there is a lot to find out!. great going Author...all the best!
As A beetroot, I approve this novel. It has some great theory behind it, its fun to read, I have enjoy this lots. I want to know more about the world now.
Had to leave a review! Loved the first chapter and the developments so far! Can't wait to see Kharl again though, Olive is stealing all the thunder!
Improving as the chapters go on! The descriptions and ways of painting an image with words is phenomenal. The most recent Fight was AWESOME!!!!!!!!
This is AMAZING, LOVE IT, I WANT MORE. GIVE ME MORE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Honestly very well written, couple of punctuation issues. But I WANT MORE
The inner monologue is very rich. This is a novel that feels relatable and is carefully crafted—attributed to the Author's vivid imagination. I have noticed that this novel was heavily inspired by other similar novels but it doesn't feel common at all. If you're looking for a rich first-person narrated novel, this one is definitely a read—It will instantly pull you with its appeal by relatability.